2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错8

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and are

　　playing sports regular. But the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet the

　　public growing demand. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.

　　Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all

　　courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days

　　or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is

　　expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will

　　encourage more people to participate in sports.

　　2.Error correction

　　I'm a senior three student．I often do bad in myexams，so I have been trying to catch up the others．But I'm such concerned about my marks that sometimes

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　　l cannot eat or sleep well at a night．I’m afraid thatI may get low marks in the tests again even if I work

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　　hard than before． I have no courage to face low marks．I cannot fix my mind to my study, whenever I think of

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　　this. It is obvious that the worry had a bad effect on

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　　my school works. I’m feeling very sad. Would you

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　　please tell me what I should deal with my worry?

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　　3.

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误）则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　该行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在右边横线上写出所加的词。

　　该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。

　　注意：原行没错的不要改。

　　A married couple were in a car while the wife turned to

　　76．__________

　　her husband and asked, “Would you like to stop for coffee?” “No,

　　77．__________

　　thanks．” he answered truthfully．But they didn’t stop．However,

　　78．__________

　　the wife, who has indeed wanted to stop, became angry, because

　　79．_________

　　she felt her preference had not considered．The husband, seeing that

　　80．_________

　　his wife was angry, became frustrated．Why didn’t she just say that

　　81．_________

　　she wanted? Unfortunately, he failed in to see that his wife was

　　82．_________

　　asking the question, in order not to get an immediately decision, 83．_________

　　but rather to begin discussion．And the women didn’t realize that

　　84．_________

　　when her husband said no, he was just express his preference, not

　　85．_________

　　giving an order．

　　4.此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误）则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　该行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在右边横线上写出所加的词。

　　该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。

　　注意：原行没错的不要改。

　　Dear Sir,

　　I am university student．I once thought life at the

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　　university must be excellent, but now I had changed my mind．7．_________

　　I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move 78．_________

　　into the dormitory．Last term, I got along peacefully and 9．_________

　　happy．But I find they are not willing to be with me now． 0．_________

　　They don’t talk with me, so they’ve become cold toward 81．_________

　　me．Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about what 2．_________

　　I felt like, but I failed to find an opening．When leaving 3．_________

　　alone, I am always recall this sadness．Why can’t I win true

　　_________

　　friendship? I’m lonely, and look forward to get your advice soon．5．_________

　　Yours,

　　Peter

　　5.

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　For as long as I can remember, I have been very bad

　　at arguing with people ．As soon as someone agree

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　　with me, I get angry because I feel attacking, like the

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　　other person is out to show that I am right ．And for

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　　some reason , I hate being wrong! But my immediate

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　　reaction is to get very defensive．I rise my voice, and

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　　I end up saying something I later regret．Needless to say,

　　81．

　　the whole thing ends with me blaming for myself , and the

　　82．

　　other person felt alienated （疏远的） from me．This

　　83．

　　bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly

　　same thing and I hate!

　　84．

　　Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship

　　with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my

　　85．

　　being afraid of being wrong ．

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　　other person is out to show that I am right ．And for

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　　some reason , I hate being wrong ! But

　　my immediate

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　　reaction is to get very defensive ．I rise my voice , and

　　80．

　　I end up saying something I later regret ．Needless to say,

　　81．

　　the whole thing ends with me blaming

　　for myself , and the

　　82．

　　other person felt alienated （疏远的） from me ．This

　　83．

　　bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly

　　same thing and I hate

　　!

　　84．

　　Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship

　　with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my

　　85．

　　being afraid of being wrong ．

　　试卷答案

　　1.’s

　　Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all

　　However

　　courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days

　　are

　　permitting

　　or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is

　　many

　　expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will

　　high

　　access

　　encourage more people to participate in sports.

　　2.

　　66. bad改为badly

　　67. 在up后加with

　　68. such改为so

　　69. 去掉a

　　70. 正确

　　71. hard改为harder

　　72. to改为on/upon

　　73.had改为has

　　74. works改为work

　　75. what改为how

　　3.

　　76．while → when。连词的错误。从语境看，这里用when引导状语从句表示“就在这时，这时突然。”

　　77．√

　　78．But → So。连词的错误。语境表示顺接的关系，用so：于是他们就没停车。

　　79．has → had。时态的错误。这里叙述过去的事情，用过去完成时。

　　80．not后加been。语态的错误。这里显然应该用被动语态表示被考虑。

　　81．that→what。连词的错误。这里连词引导宾语从句并在从句中做want的宾语，用what。

　　82．去掉in。动词搭配的错误。fail直接接不定式做宾语。

　　83．immediately→ immediate。词类的错误。用形容词而不是副词作定语。

　　84．women→woman。名词的数的错误。这里应该用单数名词与语境保持一致。

　　85．express→expressing。非谓语动词的错误。用过去进行时的was doing表示当时发生的动作。

　　4.

　　76．am后加a7．ave。时态的错误。这里应该用现在完成时表示延续到现在的动作。

　　78．√

　　9．I we代词的错误。语境表示作者和室友相处很好，用we。

　　80．happyhappily词类的错误。用副词而不是形容词作状语。

　　81．and。连词的错误。用并列连词表示陈述多个事实。

　　82．timetimes短语的错误。这里表示“几次”，用many times。

　　83．leavingleft非谓语动词的错误。语境表示被独自一人撇在一边时，用过去分词做状语。

　　84．去掉am5．getgetting。非谓语动词的错误。look forward to接动名词或名词、代词等做宾语。

　　5.

　　76．agree 改为 disagree （一有人与我意见不一致）

　　77 attacking 改为 attacked （我感到受了攻击或伤害）

　　78．right 改为 wrong （别人故意指出我错了）

　　79．but 改为so （此处为因果关系,而不是转折关系）

　　80．rise 改为 raise （“提高声音”用raise 及物动词）

　　81．正确。

　　82．去掉blame 后面的for ,

　　83．felt 改为 feeling （ 与前面的blaming 一致）

　　84．hate 后添加it （ it 代指 “这样做”）85．dangerous 改为 danger （be in danger 为固定搭配）

　　6.

　　76．agree 改为 disagree （一有人与我意见不一致）

　　77 attacking 改为 attacked （我感到受了攻击或伤害）

　　78．right 改为 wrong （别人故意指出我错了）

　　79．but 改为so （此处为因果关系,而不是转折关系）

　　80．rise 改为 raise （“提高声音”用raise 及物动词）

　　81．正确。

　　82．去掉blame 后面的for ,

　　83．felt 改为 feeling （ 与前面的blaming 一致）

　　84．hate 后添加it （ it 代指 “这样做”）

　　85．dangerous 改为 danger （be in danger 为固定搭配）