2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错27

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：

　　1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　There is no doubt whether scores are important for students. So today when I see the score,90, on my test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed Mom was sure to praise for

　　me. On getting home, I raised a test paper before her and said proudly, “Mom, look at my

　　score!” Mom had a look at them. Surprisingly, she said calm, “Good, but I hope you can find out

　　the reason that ten points were taken away.” Heard the words, I stared in amazement for a while.

　　But since then I understand that it is important whether we have got high scores. It is whether

　　we know what we have learned or haven’t that really matter.

　　2.下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分。   

　　Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school.

　　Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate.

　　However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.

　　I decided to make the best for it.

　　I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates.

　　Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available.

　　Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are.

　　3.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 没处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　The other day, I was invited my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.

　　4.短文改错

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley. It’s a brief or excellent article about credit cards. The author explains what credit cards work. And he also points out the positive and negative aspect for having it. American consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards. However, the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in world. The key point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company. This protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.

　　5.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

　　文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”

　　6.短文改错

　　文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在此处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Brad,

　　I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.

　　As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.

　　Li Hua

　　试卷答案

　　1.

　　There is no doubt whether scores are important for students. So today when I see the score,

　　that

　　saw

　　90, on my test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed Mom was sure to praise for

　　me. On getting home, I raised a test paper before her and said proudly, “Mom, look at my

　　the

　　score!” Mom had a look at them. Surprisingly, she said calm, “Good, but I hope you can find out

　　it

　　calmly

　　the reason that ten points were taken away.” Heard the words, I stared in amazement for a while.

　　why

　　Hearing

　　But since then I understand that it is ∧ important whether we have got high scores. It is whether

　　not

　　we know what we have learned or haven’t that really matter.

　　matters

　　2.1.disappointing—disappointed

　　2.find—found

　　3.However—Besides或Also或 Moreover for—of

　　5.hardly—hard

　　6.teachers 前加my或the

　　student—students

　　8.what—which

　　9.去掉but后的that

　　determine—determines

　　3.

　　The other day, I was invited∧my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when

　　to

　　surprised

　　I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t

　　months

　　know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to

　　what

　　and

　　make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up

　　realized

　　I

　　to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me

　　smiling

　　happy

　　excitedly. That night, we had

　　a

　　great fun together.

　　4.

　　What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley. It’s a brief or excellent article

　　and/but

　　about credit cards. The author explains what credit cards work. And he also points out the positive

　　how

　　and negative aspect for having it . American consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards.

　　Aspects

　　them

　　most

　　However, the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in∧world. The key

　　is

　　the

　　point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent

　　made

　　from the credit card company. This protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages

　　protects

　　of using credit cards.

　　5.

　　Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now

　　1. touching

　　listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going

　　from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all

　　2. because

　　3.himself

　　his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog

　　sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the

　　4.去掉was

　　people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell,

　　5.so

　　and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted

　　6.too

　　them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of

　　7.the

　　coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the

　　plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he

　　8.on

　　9.didn’t

　　petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when

　　10.gently

　　it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the

　　woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”

　　6.1.ask—asked

　　2. the—a

　　3. Comparing—Compared

　　4. hard—harder

　　5.expensively—expensive

　　6.删with

　　7.ThereforeHowever

　　8.house—houses

　　9.we—us

　　10.efforts后加to