2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错28

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　Air travel has three advantage over train travel. First, it can save much time. We can fly from one place to other in a long time, but by train we have to spend more time. Second, air travel is more comfortable because the plane flies so smooth that we can have a good rest during the trip. Third, the train is crowding sometimes and passengers have to sit for a long time, what makes them tired. But train travel also has it’s own advantages. For an example, traveling by train cost only a little money. Besides this, we can enjoy the view out the train’s windows.

　　2.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Several weeks ago, my parents were away for business, and I had to be all by me for two days. My parents start early that morning, and I got up soon after they left. The first one night I was scared, so I turned on all the light and kept them on the whole night. For fear of get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near bed and set the alarms at 6:00, 6:10, and 6:15. In order to prove I could take care myself, I washed my own clothes, though I can wait for my mother ot do it. I really felt proud of myself but thought I was a big girl.

　　3.

　　假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该词下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　It was a long time since we last saw each other. You can hardly imagine how I miss you. How are you getting with your first job? I remember you once tell me you were eager to graduate and to become an English teacher. Now you must have many first-hand experience. How do you find your English teaching? Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected in college? And do your student enjoy your classroom teaching? Anyway, I believe you must very popular with the kids, for you are a born teacher. Hope you great success in your work! Yes, why not give me call and come for a get-together this weekend?

　　4.

　　When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he should ask for leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject. In the end of that term, we told him that how much we appreciated him. We were so worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what medicine he took. With satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a bottle of tea.

　　5.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Last February, I was on holiday in Beijing with my family．One morning, I was sleeping

　　soundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister, "It's snowing．" I got up quickly,

　　dressed me and opened the window．Wow, I couldn't believe in my eyes．Everything including

　　trees, roofs and grass were covered with thick snow．In distance I could see lots of cars, like small

　　white box, moving slowly on the road．I could also see some lovely birds flying happily in the

　　snow．How a beautiful sight! I became exciting because I had never seen snow before. In no time,

　　I ran out with my camera and take many photos to record my first experience of snow．

　　6.短文改错

　　I used to going to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field look for rabbits to draw. Losing in thought, I hadn’t noticed a bull to running towards me. About 100 meters ahead was a tree under that I would sit and draw. Suddenly, I heard the noise behind me. I turned and saw the bull. Knowing a bull can run more faster than a man, I quickly reached the tree and climb up. From there I saw the bull kicking my food bag by its feet. It kept done this for 15 minutes and moved away. But I was quite nervous in the tree.

　　试卷答案

　　1.1.advantage-advantages 2.other–another 3.long–short

　　4.smooth-smoothly

　　5.crowding- crowded

　　6.what – which

　　7.it’s – its

　　8.cross out ‘an ’ 9. cost-costs 10.add ‘of ’after out

　　2.

　　Several weeks ago, my parents were away for business, and I had to be all by me for two

　　on

　　myself

　　days. My parents start early that morning, and I got up soon after they left. The first one night I

　　started

　　was scared, so I turned on all the light and kept them on the whole night. For fear of get up late

　　lights

　　getting

　　the next morning, I put three alarm clocks nearbed and set the alarms at 6:00, 6:10, and

　　my/the

　　6:15. In order to prove I could take care myself, I washed my own clothes, though I

　　of

　　can wait for my mother ot do it. I really felt proud of myself but thought I was a big girl.

　　could

　　and

　　3.

　　was---is ；

　　with前加on或along；

　　tell---told；

　　to become---become；

　　many---much；

　　interested---interesting

　　student-students；

　　must---must be;

　　Hope---Wish;

　　call---a call

　　4.

　　When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid

　　some

　　medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he

　　class

　　should ask for a leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on

　　stay

　　but

　　time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject.

　　harder

　　In the end of that term, we told that how much we appreciated him. We were so

　　At

　　worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what

　　worried

　　his

　　medicine he took. With ∧ satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a

　　a

　　bottle of tea.”

　　5.

　　Last February, I was on holiday in Beijing with my family．One morning, I was sleeping

　　soundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister, "It's snowing．" I got up quickly,

　　sudden

　　dressed me and opened the window．Wow, I couldn't believe in my eyes．Everything including

　　trees, roofs and grass were covered with thick snow．Indistance I could see lots of cars, like

　　was

　　the

　　small white box, moving slowly on the road．I could also see some lovely birds flying happily inthe snow．How a beautiful sight! I became exciting because I had never seen snow before. In no

　　excited

　　time,I ran out with my camera and take many photos to record my first experience of snow．

　　took

　　6.1. going→go.

　　2. look—looking 3. losing→lost. 4. 去掉to. 5. that→which. 6. the→a. 7. more→much. 8. climb→climbed. 9. by→with. 10. done→doing.