2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错31

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to the factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw worker working very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we had a very good day. We real hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.

　　2.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to

　　pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in

　　and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way

　　they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because

　　they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school

　　students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of

　　course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.

　　3.

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　I used to going to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field looking rabbits to draw. Lost in thought, I didn’t notice the bull running towards me. About 100 meters ahead was a tree under that I would sit and draw. Sudden, I heard a loud noise behind me. I turned around and saw a bull. Knowing a bull could run much more faster than a man, I quickly reached the tree and climb up. From there I saw the bull kicking me food bag with its feet. It kept do this for 15 minute and then moved away. But I was quite nervous in the tree.

　　4.

　　文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best. However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don’t want to follow them. With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right. Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time.

　　5.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（

　　），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Are you looking for something interested? Would you like to give a hand to other people in your spare time? Then joining us and be a volunteer! We have job for people of all ages. Anyone from students to old people can become ours members. You can help people in many ways. Some schools need volunteers to help take the care of children. Volunteers are needed in hospitals help the patients. Animal lovers can help save dogs and cats without homes.

　　There is nothing for everyone. “I often played computer games when I was freely before. Now I help old people learn to use computers,” said a volunteer aged 18. Unless everyone helps out a bit, we’ll all have better and warmer world to live in.

　　6.

　　该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

　　修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改十处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。

　　In recently years many young people prefer to go shopping on the Internet. People have different opinion about online shopping. Some think online shopping was more convenient and the goods are cheap. However, other believe it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. And it is possible to check the quality of the goods.

　　As far as I am concern, going shopping in a store is a better way. It is a fun to walk around stores and looking at various goods on sale. We can choose what we really need and even find a good bargain. However, we can chat with the shop assistant and acquire a lot of useful information.

　　试卷答案

　　1.

　　We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to

　　the

　　factory last week.

　　when

　　a

　　It was a

　　larger with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked ∧a garden and we could see colorful

　　large

　　like

　　flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw worker working

　　everywhere

　　workers

　　very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. On the

　　way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we had a very good day. We real hoped that

　　tired

　　really

　　we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.

　　leaving

　　2.

　　College students have a little（few ）ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to （去掉to）pay the fees. Some students may apply to（for ）a bank loan and others will try to find  part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student（students） can win a scholarship. By（In） this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let my parents pay half of their（my） fees because they are（not ）  rich enough. Beside（Besides）my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach（teaching） some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to（that）I can easily win a scholarship.

　　3.

　　I used to going (go) to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field looking (for) rabbits to draw. Lost in thought, I didn’t notice the (a) bull running towards me. About 100 meters ahead was a tree under that (which) I would sit and draw. Sudden,(Suddenly) I heard a loud noise coming from behind me. I turned around and saw a bull. Knowing a bull could run much more (去掉) faster than a man, I quickly reached the tree and climb（climbed）up. From there I saw the bull kicking me (my) food bag with its feet. It kept do (doing) this for 15 minute (minutes) and then moved away. But I was quite nervous in the tree.

　　4.

　　1.considered-→consider

　　2. 去掉 an

　　3 experiences→ experience

　　4. what→ how

　　5. they→ we

　　6. Therefore→ However

　　7. passed→ passing

　　8. have→ has

　　9. for→ to

　　10.worth前加 are

　　5.

　　Are you looking for something interested? Would you like to give a hand to other

　　interesting

　　people in your spare time? Then joining us and be a volunteer! We have job for

　　join

　　jobs

　　people of all ages. Anyone from students to old people can become ours members.

　　our

　　You can help people in many ways. Some schools need volunteers to help take the

　　去掉the

　　care of children. Volunteers are needed in hospitals helpthe patients. Animal lovers

　　to

　　can help save dogs and cats without homes.

　　There is nothing for everyone. “I often

　　something

　　played computer games when I was freely before. Now I help old people learn to use

　　free

　　computers,” said a volunteer aged 18. Unless everyone helps out a bit, we’ll all have∧

　　If

　　a

　　better and warmer world to live in.

　　6.罗斯福说，《全国工业复兴法》是美国国会制定的“最具有深远意义”的法规，实施该法的主要目的是（

　　）

　　A．实现经济复兴

　　B．增加就业机会

　　C．国家干预经济

　　D．防止盲目竞争