2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错38

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.

　　文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在此处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出修改的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

　　Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.

　　2.

　　文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

　　In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.

　　Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

　　To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.

　　3.

　　该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

　　修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.

　　4.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.

　　To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come．I started walking towards a table．Fortunately, I fell over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．

　　I was frightened and unsure how to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it fast．I thought he was going to ask for his parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish his food．

　　5.

　　下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear editor,

　　Next year I will go to university and becoming a college student, and I have never been away from my parents. I don’t know how to adapt myself to my university life. I hear many freshmen are at loss what to do when we are at university. They can’t take care of themselves in their everyday life, feel lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phone are sometimes gone. And because of different climates and the food, they often feel sick. Some even rented rooms outside the campus, but I don’t think it’s so safely. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to get used the university life in the future?

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　6.

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　 试卷答案

　　1.

　　Ten years ago, I had(去掉had) worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of（the） factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and(but) could see nothing. Lucky (luckily)for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late(later), four police car(cars) arrived at the front gate. They searched for(去掉for) the factory carefully, tried(trying) to find something unusual. In the end, I am(was) told that the rain had brought about the short circuit,

　　that(which) caused the accident.

　　2.

　　In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers

　　an

　　competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we

　　problems

　　However

　　stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and

　　stressed

　　both

　　necessary.

　　Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make

　　a

　　remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and

　　or

　　rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't

　　making

　　cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us ∧learn from each other. And that's why most of

　　to

　　the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

　　To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the

　　successfully

　　relationship between competition and cooperation.

　　3.

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或前加who/that） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them（改为 it）.

　　4.

　　To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to(此处加a)fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come．I started walking towards a table．Fortunatelyortunately), I fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或from) my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．

　　I was frightened and unsure how (what)to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after (before)the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute (minutes)later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it (去掉it)fast．I thought he was going to ask for his (my) parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish (finishing)his food．

　　5.

　　1. becoming改为become

　　2. and改为but

　　3. at后加a

　　4. we改为they

　　5. feel改为feeling或feel前加and

　　6. phone改为phones

　　7. 去掉the

　　8. rented改为rent

　　9. safely改为safe

　　10. used后加to

　　6.

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old

　　deeply

　　man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and

　　knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people

　　worse

　　directions/all 改any

　　around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.

　　rushed

　　knowing

　　Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧. The old man counted the

　　up

　　money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of

　　missing /lost

　　nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　our

　　that