2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错39

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线( / )划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Last evening, I went to a teahouse with my best friends Susan. Before the tea was serving, we talked to each other happily. When the waiter came to us with the tea, we didn't see him. Unfortunately Susan raises her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. Her hand hit on the cup, and the tea was spattered(溅洒) on her trousers. In my surprise, instead complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it's not on my white shirt, and I can't even clean it.”His words were very inspired. We couldn't foresee what would happen, but looking at it in a positive way could make we always happy.

　　2.

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在下面加上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.

　　3.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ )划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　There were many people n the bus and no vacant seats. When a woman got off, a man near the door attempted to rise, but she had forced him back into his seat. “thank you,” she said, “but please don’t do that. I am perfect able to stand.” “But, madam, let me…” began the man. “I ask you to keep your seat,” interrupted a woman with the hands on her shoulders. So the man tried to rise, and said: “Madam, will you kindly permit me to…?” “No, no,” said the woman and again force him back. At last the man managed to get up, say: “ Madam, you carried me three block beyond my house. I wanted get off.”

　　4.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Ms Tailor,Football is my favourite sport. When it is comes to football, I always have much

　　to saying. Last week, I quarreled with my mother about if I could play football with my

　　classmates at weekends. My mother holds the view strong that I should devote all my

　　spare time to study all the subjects well. In my opinion, only when I try my best to

　　study I be able to be admitted to a university. But I really can’t accept her view. As far

　　as I’m concerned, playing football not only build up my strength and also makes me

　　full of energy every day. Could you give me some advices on how to persuade my

　　mother to allow me to play football at weekends?

　　Yours

　　Jim

　　5.短文改错

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上勾一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词；并也用斜线划摔。

　　此行缺一个词j在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的诃。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　Mr Hill was a chicken farmer where had hundreds of chickens．

　　76．

　　He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money, so he lived in a very

　　77．

　　hot part of the country.

　　He found his hen laid hardly any eggs

　　78．

　　in summer, and then he decided to put his air conditioner into

　　79．

　　his chicken house so that his hens would lay well all through year．

　　80．

　　The boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day．

　　81．

　　He thought that he might be able to persuade him to buy for an air

　　82．

　　conditioner when he saw．Mr Hill's house, ‘‘Your wife would be more happier

　　83．

　　and more comfortable then ,” he said to Mr-Hill. But Mr Hill was not interesting. 84．

　　“My wife didn't lay eggs,” Mr Hill said．

　　6.文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

　　Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them

　　safe journey.

　　试卷答案

　　1.

　　Last evening, I went to a teahouse with my best friends (friend) Susan. Before the tea was serving (served), we talked to each other happily. When the waiter came to us with the tea, we didn't see him. Unfortunately Susan raises (raised)

　　her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. Her hand hit on()

　　the cup, and the tea was spattered(溅洒) on her trousers. In To)

　　my surprise, instead (∧of)

　　complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it's not on my white shirt, and (or)

　　I can't even clean it.” His

　　(Her)

　　words were very inspired (inspiring). We couldn't foresee what would happen, but looking at it in a positive way could make we (us ) always happy.

　　2.

　　Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I

　　brothers

　　dead

　　was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn.

　　me

　　using

　　We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in / local restaurant for breakfast,

　　a

　　and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right in

　　traveled(travelled)

　　before

　　spot the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never

　　or

　　hunted an animal successfully,

　　but

　　I learned to be brave and patiently through the

　　patient

　　experience.

　　3.

　　第一处：off→on【解题思路】【解题思路】→prefectly。【解题思路】→the。【解题思路】→his。【解题思路】→But。【解题思路】→forced。【解题思路】→saying。【解题思路】→blocks。【解题思路】【解题思路】

　　4.1. 去掉 is 2. saying---say 3. if---whether 4.

　　strong---strongly

　　5. study---studying

　　6. my---her

　　7. I前加will

　　8. build---builds

　　9. and---but

　　10.

　　advices---advice

　　5.76. where → who

　　77.so → but

　　78.hen → hens

　　79. √

　　80.在year前加the

　　81.her →him

　　82.去掉for

　　83.more → much 或去掉more

　　84. interesting →interested

　　85. didn't →doesn’t

　　6.1．在their 后加with， 因为help sb. with sth.为固定用法。

　　2．search改为过去式，由时间状语“Last weekend”可知，这是描述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时。

　　3．information为不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式。

　　4．We改为 I，“我”去买票，应用代词I。

　　5．had改为was,这里表示的是存在，所以用there be 句型。

　　6．在the suitcase前加into.

　　7．引导一个定语从句，代替指物的先行词things，所以用that/which。

　　8．show改为see, see sb. off意为“为某人送行”，符合语境。

　　9．Happily改为happy , feel为系动词，后面应该用形容词作表语。

　　10．在safe journey前加a,具体的一次旅行。