2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错46

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　2.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意:

　　每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　The way of communication in people’s life has changed a lot of in recent years. In the past, people keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or use the public telephone. But now almost everyone have a mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access the Internet, it enables them to send and accept e-mails whenever they like. With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficiently. It used to take them several days to hear from each other, and now it takes only several minutes, even if we are in two different continents.

　　3.短文改错

　　I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gate I happen to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years. After that, we went boating in a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write each other in the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very gladly to have a chance to practice my oral English.

　　4.短文改错

　　One Sunday morning, there were much people in the park. In a shop, a woman was buying an ice-cream while a young man behind her took his handbag away. She shouted, “Stop thief! He’s robbed me from my bag!” Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sit quietly on a bench nearby, reading a newspaper. As the robber was running passed him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put between the robber’s legs. The young man fell down on the ground hardly. Soon two policeman came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked for the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.

　　5.假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at

　　that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

　　difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

　　of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We

　　can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in

　　return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

　　6.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　 试卷答案

　　1.

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old

　　deeply

　　man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and

　　knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people

　　worse

　　directions/all 改any

　　around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.

　　rushed

　　knowing

　　Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧. The old man counted the

　　up

　　money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of

　　missing /lost

　　nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　our

　　that

　　2.

　　1. a lot of中的of去掉 2. keep—kept

　　3. use—using

　　4. have—has

　　5. access后加to 6. it—which

　　7. accept—receive

　　8. efficiently—efficient

　　9. and—but

　　10. we—they

　　3.

　　1. happen—happened

　　2. America—American

　　3. him—them

　　4. travel—travelling

　　5. with去掉 6. been去掉 7. in—on

　　8. address—addresses

　　9. wirte后加to 10. gladly—glad

　　4.

　　1. much—many

　　2. while—when

　　3. his—her

　　4. from—of

　　5. sit—sitting

　　6. passed—past

　　7. put后加it 8. hardly—hard

　　9. policeman—policemen

　　10. thanked后的for去掉

　　5.

　　Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that

　　lesson

　　great

　　moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

　　had

　　difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

　　walking

　　and

　　of my classmates. As∧ result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We

　　a

　　worse

　　can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in

　　their

　　return. In this way,

　　we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

　　With

　　6.1. deep—deeply,

　　2. the 去掉 3. bad---worse

　　4. direction---directions或者前面all----any

　　5. rush----rushed

　　6. knowing----knowing

　　7. pick后加up

　　8.

　　missed---missing / lost

　　9. your----our

　　10. what---that