2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错55

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜钱（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.

　　The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate playing table tennis.

　　Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our techniques. Then I kept practicing while I became confidently enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players of my class.

　　I really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our

　　potential and achieve to our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”

　　2.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　My school has taken on a new look since it moved into a new place. It is quite different of the old one. There used to be have only one classroom building and the playground is not large enough for all the students to have sports. Sometimes we had to practise run along the streets outside. The teaching conditions were even worst. Our teachers used to teach with only a blackboard, but the experiments could only be done in the classroom. But now besides the classroom building, a modern lab building has put into use, which all kinds of experiments can be done. We have not only a large playground and also a gym. Classes can be given with the help of computers and multimedia. What great changes! I feel proudly of my school.

　　3.

　　下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy. She was upsetting about the news herself. In the spring, Maria’s mother had said Maria might be allowed bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach. Since then, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they would do together. By the time August had arrived, Maria’s mother had total forgotten her promise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but that it wouldn’t be enough room for Freddy because Maria’s cousin, Theresa, would be going to the shore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria’s house.

　　4.短文改错（10小题；1.5分,满分15分）

　　文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

　　2、只允许修改10处,多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Only by this way can you be a good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true.

　　5.短文改错

　　（共10 小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_），并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1

　　每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Ms. Donforth,

　　I’ m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve heard about that

　　you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we have been learning about

　　it’s rich culture and long history. Since you have visited Greece several times,

　　so I would like to know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We

　　have learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal experience

　　will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class.

　　Could you share your experiences for us? It will be surely exciting and

　　rewarding. I hoped that you think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly.

　　Sincerely,

　　Jeremy Taylor

　　6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　试卷答案

　　1.

　　Today I can still remember how I became (加a) good table tennis player.

　　The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate (classmates) playing table tennis.

　　Amazing (Amazed) at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our (their) techniques. Then I kept practicing while (until) I became confidently (confident) enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players of (in) my class.

　　I really take proud (pride) in this experience, because it helped (helps) me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to(去掉to) our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”

　　2.

　　My school has taken on a new look since it moved into a new place. It is quite

　　different of the old one. There used to be have only one classroom building and

　　from

　　the playground is not large enough for all the students to have sports. Sometimes

　　was

　　we had to practise run along the streets outside. The teaching conditions were

　　running

　　even worst. Our teachers used to teach with only a blackboard, but the experiments

　　worse

　　and

　　could only be done in the classroom. But now besides the classroom building, a

　　modern lab building has∧put into use, which all kinds of experiments can be done.

　　been

　　where

　　We have not only a large playground and also a gym. Classes can be given with

　　but

　　the help of computers and multimedia. What great changes! I feel proudly of my

　　proud

　　school.

　　3.

　　Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend

　　the

　　Freddy. She was upsetting about the news herself. In the spring, Maria’s mother had

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　　said Maria might be allowed∧bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at

　　to

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　　the beach. Since then, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the

　　but

　　thing they would do together. By the time August had arrived, Maria’s mother had

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　　total forgotten her promise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but

　　totally

　　that it wouldn’t be enough room for Freddy because Maria’s cousin, Theresa, would

　　there

　　be going to the shore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria’s house.

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　　5.Dear Ms. Donforth,

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　　heard about that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we

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　　Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to

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　　Could you share your experiences for

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　　Sincerely,

　　Jeremy Taylor

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