2016届湖南湘乡高考英语二轮复习短文改错精编（5）

　　2016湖南省湘乡市高考英语短文改错（二轮）精编（5）

　　短文改错。

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid herself in the toilet，because he did not want to pay. But the passenger saw him. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say，“There's a bum (流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was pass from person to person. But anywhere along the way，it told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped bus and telephoned the police. When the police came，they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway，which resulted from a traffic jam. The police searched for several hour. Of course they found no bomb at all！

　　1.

　　第二句 herself 改为 himself

　　第三句the改为a

　　第四句say改为said

　　第五句pass改为passed

　　第六句anywhere改为somewhere

　　第七句told前加was

　　第八句immediate改为immediately

　　第九句or改为and

　　第十句from改为in

　　第十一句hour改为hours

　　短文改错

　　以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　Li Hua is a senior three student who devote himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several

　　courses.In the evening, he studies at home until deep into

　　2.

　　the night.He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work

　　3.

　　effectively. In Sunday morning, Li Hua was about to study

　　4.

　　when his father came up and advised him to have a break.

　　Soon they had good idea. They bought a kite which they

　　5.

　　liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs

　　6.

　　where Li Hua enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a

　　7.

　　picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On

　　8.

　　Monday, Li Hua was energetic and actively in class. He

　　9.

　　said it was only why he had a better weekend.

　　10.

　　【参考答案】2.

　　1. devote---devotes

　　2. studies---studied

　　3. too sleepy---so sleepy

　　4. In Sunday--- On Sunday

　　5. had good--- had a good

　　6. liked it---去掉it

　　7. fly---flying

　　8. but---and

　　9. actively---active

　　10. why---because

　　短文改错

　　短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　【参考答案】3.

　　My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to

　　buying

　　Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for∧ long

　　there

　　a

　　holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized

　　and

　　that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had

　　in

　　was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my

　　were

　　luggage

　　friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　friend’s

　　felt

　　【2016模拟题】短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。

　　Our school newspaper is looking after an editor for its English edition. The job mainly included two parts: One is to choose properly English articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students. The others is to pick out article from those written by students in our school and edit them for use.

　　We hope that he/she can meet following requirements: First, he/she is willing to be devote some of the spare time to serve the others. Second, it's necessary for him/ her to be good at both English and fine art. However, the ability to use the computer is important as well.

　　Those who is interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students' Union this week.

　　短文改错

　　第一句：after 改为for

　　第二句：included 改为 includes

　　第三句：properly 改为proper

　　第四句：others 改为other;

　　article 改为articles

　　第五句：meet 后加the

　　第六句：去掉be； serve 改为serving

　　第七句：However改为Besides

　　第八句：is改为are

　　【2016模拟题】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

　　增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

　　Time flies! This is a third year that I have been in this school. In the past two and a half years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me best was an activity called “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for so a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. After divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We continued doing that until all the work was done. Although we were exhausted, but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.

　　【参考答案】短文改错：

　　a改为the

　　2. had 改为has

　　3. best 改为most

　　4. In 改为 On

　　5. which改为where或前面加on

　　6. so（a long time） 改为such

　　7. divided前加being

　　8. (into the) hole 改为holes

　　9. them改为it

　　10.去掉but

　　第一节

　　短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语

　　言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best. However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don’t want to follow them. With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right. Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time.

　　【参考答案】短文改错：（共10小题，满分10分）

　　1. considered-consider

　　2. an advice-advice

　　3. experiences-experience

　　4. what-how

　　5. they-we

　　6. Therefore-However

　　7. passed-passing

　　8. have-has

　　9. for-to

　　10. worth-are worth