2016届浙江临安市高考英语二轮短文改错练习（1）

　　浙江临安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错练习（1）及答案

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　For as long as I can remember , I have been very bad

　　at arguing with people ．As soon as someone agree

　　76．

　　with me , I get angry because I feel attacking , like the

　　77．

　　other person is out to show that I am right ．And for

　　78．

　　some reason , I hate being wrong ! But

　　my immediate

　　79．

　　reaction is to get very defensive ．I rise my voice , and

　　80．

　　I end up saying something I later regret ．Needless to say,

　　81．

　　the whole thing ends with me blaming

　　for myself , and the

　　82．

　　other person felt alienated （疏远的） from me ．This

　　83．

　　bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly

　　same thing and I hate

　　!

　　84．

　　Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship

　　with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my

　　85．

　　being afraid of being wrong ．

　　【参考答案】

　　76．agree 改为 disagree （一有人与我意见不一致）

　　77 attacking 改为 attacked （我感到受了攻击或伤害）

　　78．right 改为 wrong （别人故意指出我错了）

　　79．but 改为so （此处为因果关系,而不是转折关系）

　　80．rise 改为 raise （“提高声音”用raise 及物动词）

　　81．正确。

　　82．去掉blame 后面的for ,

　　83．felt 改为 feeling （ 与前面的blaming 一致）

　　84．hate 后添加it （ it 代指 “这样做”）

　　85．dangerous 改为 danger （be in danger 为固定搭配）

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Internet shopping is new way of shopping. It offers shoppers a number of benefits . The most importantly advantage is convenience. You can shop as you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day, but you do not have to queue with other shopper. Secondly, it is easy to find what you were looking for on the internet. Finally, it is often cheap to buy goods through the internet than in stores .

　　There are disadvantages too. The main disadvantage is that you can’t actually see the products what you are buying or check their quality. Also quite a little people will miss the opportunity to talk about friends while shopping . Besides, some people are worried about paying for goods use credit cards.

　　【参考答案】4.

　　1. a

　　2.important

　　3.and

　　4.shoppers

　　5.are

　　6.cheaper

　　7.

　　that/ 去what

　　8. few

　　9.With/to

　　10.using

　　短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　My school life is very interesting but meaningful. I usually get up at a quarter past six. After I wash his face, I read English for about half an hour. I think what it is a good habit. I always go to school by bike, to eat lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom. On the afternoon school is over at 5 o’clock. After school, we often play basketball or do some other sport on the playground happy. I went home at about five forty. Have had supper, I watch TV for while, and then I do my homework. I go to bed at about 9:30.

　　【参考答案】5.

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　　and

　　past six. After I wash his face, I read English for about half an hour. I think what it is a

　　my

　　that或删去what

　　good habit. I always go to school by bike, to eat lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom. On the afternoon school is over at 5 o’clock. After school, we often

　　In

　　play basketball or do some other sport on the playground happy. I went home at about

　　sports

　　happily

　　go

　　five forty. Have had supper, I watch TV for ∧while, and then I do my homework. I

　　Having

　　a

　　go to bed at about 9:30.

　　短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1. 5分, 满分15分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to class of foreign adult students.

　　After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked them to

　　give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the students

　　seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student and

　　said, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.

　　Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However,

　　he repeated, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.

　　【参考答案】6.

　　A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to ∧ class of foreign adult

　　giving

　　a

　　students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked them

　　and

　　to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the

　　him

　　smoothly

　　students seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student

　　until

　　and said, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.

　　surprised

　　Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However , he

　　thought

　　therefore

　　repeated, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian then kissed him on both cheek .

　　cheeks

　　短文改错:（满分10分）

　　文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加： 在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to

　　help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking

　　her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,

　　another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots

　　of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.

　　As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are

　　becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach out

　　my hand without hesitation next time.

　　【参考答案】

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　　an

　　help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking

　　when

　　stopped

　　her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,

　　Hearing

　　another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots

　　who

　　of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.

　　thanks

　　As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are

　　helping

　　becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made ∧my mind that I will reach out

　　immoral

　　去掉to

　　up

　　my hand without hesitation next time.