2016届安徽芜湖市高考英语二轮书面表达选析（2）

　　安徽芜湖市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选析（2）及参考范文

　　书面表达训练

　　一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。

　　1.家庭;

　　2.工作;

　　3.业余生活

　　注意：

　　1、字数100左右；

　　2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3、开头语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

　　I  often imagine what my  life will be like in the future. ________________________

　　I often imagine what my  life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very

　　different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child .I hope I  will work in a computer company as a program

　　 designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues; I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various 

　　ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

　　基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

　　假设你是某报社记者，请根据下表提供的信息写一篇英文稿，简要地报道中国开发中西部的有关情况。

　　主要概括和实施要点

　　范围：9个省、自治区（autonomous regions）、1个直辖市（municipality）

　　面积：540万平方公里

　　人口：2.85亿

　　交通建设：修建多条公路、铁路

　　环境保护：退耕还林；防治污染

　　资源利用：开发利用其丰富的天然资源

　　人才引进：广纳各类专家、技术人员

　　【写作要求】

　　标题：New Development for Central and Western China

　　必须使用5个句子介绍所给的内容

　　将5个句子组织成连贯的短文

　　.第二节 读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分）

　　News reportFour young female college students died Friday after falling or jumping from a blazing room on the sixth floor of Shanghai Business School. Witness said one woman who jumped appeared to be aiming for bushes on the ground, but missed and landed on concrete. Witnesses said the other three were desperately trying to climb to another room amid roaring flames when they fell to the concrete paving.

　　The fire broke out in Room 602 of the seven-floor dormitory at the school’s downtown campus on Zhongshan Road West, just after 6 a.m. The fire was caused by an electrical device used to heat water. This had ignited flammable objects, police said late Friday afternoon. After receiving reports of the fire at 6:12 a.m, police, firefighters and ambulances were quickly on the scene. The fire was extinguished by 6:30 a.m., according to the school.

　　There is only one public toilet on each floor to get water and fire extinguishers in the dormitory were outdated, students said.

　　(SZ-Agencies)

　　[写作内容]

　　1． 以约30个词概括这篇报道的主要内容。

　　2． 针对此篇报道发表你对校园安全问题的看法, 至少包括以下内容要点，该部分词数大约120个词。

　　1）作为学生，我们该如何在危急的状况下保护好自己。

　　2）作为校方应该采取哪些措施避免此类悲剧的发生。

　　[写作要求]

　　1．作文中可使用实例或其它方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接

　　引用原文中的句子；

　　2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　New Development for Central and Western China

　　The Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and western China which includes 9 provinces and autonomous regions and one municipality, covering and area of 5.4 million square kilometers with a population of 285 million. The government will pay special attention to its transportation and some highways and railways will be built. To protect the environment, farmers will return farmland to forest and measures will be taken to prevent pollution. Western China is rich in natural resources, which can be exploited and made full use of. To meet the need of the development, different kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.

　　任务写作：

　　After the Tears, Let’s Focus on Dorm Safety

　　It was reported that on November 14, a tragedy occurred in a girls’ dormitory of the Shanghai Business School. Four girls jumped from their sixth-floor balcony in an attempt to escape a fire, and lost their lives.

　　People expressed their sympathy after hearing the tragedy. In my opinion, this incident reflects a lack of awareness of safety procedures. Both the college and the students are responsible for it. On one hand, we students should learn to deal with an emergency calmly in daily life. If there

　　is a crisis, we are supposed to remain calm, ensure we are safe and then call for help.

　　On the other hand, it is the school authorities’ obligation to take safety measures for students living in a campus. Furthermore, more lectures should be held on safety to enhance students’ awareness of the issue.

　　In short, to avoid similar tragedies, both sides must work together.

　　书面表达训练

　　暑假国外旅行时同团的一个小女孩于上午10点左右在机场咖啡厅附近走失，请你替她焦急的父母写一份广播稿通知找人，要点如下：女孩名叫玲玲，4岁，身高110cm左右，长发大眼，身穿红裙白鞋。如发现任何线索请将小孩送到机场广播站或拨打电话677-852-4523。对提供帮助的人表示感谢。

　　注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。

　　【参考范文】

　　Announcement

　　Ladies and Gentlemen,

　　Attention, please! Here is something urgent!

　　A four-year-old Chinese girl named Lingling is missing. She is about 110cm tall with long straight black hair as well as a pair of big eyes. She is wearing a red dress and white shoes. She was last seen at ten o’clock nearby the cafe at the airport. Lingling’s parents are very anxious as she can only speak Chinese Putonghua.

　　If any of you see her or get any clue about her, please take her to the broadcasting station of the airport or call at 677-852-4523.

　　We’d show our sincere gratitude to anyone who offers related information or who helps find the girl.

　　Thanks for your attention!

　　【深圳市2016高考英语综合能力测试题（3）】

　　基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

　　你接受了一项写作任务，写一篇关于中英诗人的英语介绍。

　　著名诗人 时代 生平 成就 评价

　　李白

　　(701～762) 盛唐，唐朝浪漫

　　主义诗人

　　一生遭受逆境 他热爱自然，向往自由；创作诗文千

　　余篇，其中30多首代代传诵至今 被誉为中国

　　的“诗仙”

　　雪莱

　　(1792～1822) 工业革命时期，

　　英国浪漫主义

　　民主诗人 英年早逝 他不满社会不平等；用诗歌颂劳动阶

　　级的欧洲第一人 被誉为“诗人

　　中的诗人”

　　*珀西·比希·雪莱(Percy Bysshe Shelley)

　　【写作要求】

　　1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

　　2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　【参考范文】基础写作 (One possible version)

　　Li Bai, a romantic poet living in the prosperous period of China’s Tang Dynasty, is regarded as the “God of poetry” in China. All his life, though he went through a lot of setbacks, he showed his deep love for nature and eager wish for freedom and wrote about one thousand poems, of which more than thirty have been widely read and recited from generation to generation till today. Compared with Li Bai, Percy Bysshe Shelley, a romantic democratic poet lived during the period of Great Britain’s Industrial Revolution. He was born over 1,000 years later than Li Bai and unfortunately died at an early age, but he also wrote many famous poems showing his dissatisfaction with the social inequality. And Shelley, considered as the “poet of poets”, became the first poet who sang for the working class in Europe.

　　【深圳市2016高考英语综合能力测试题（3）】

　　读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Helping others can really make a difference to your own life. You're always busy living your own life, but every now and then, take a break for a bit and help someone out. You will not regret doing this.

　　Here are a few easy ideas how you can help others:

　　Spend some time with one of your elderly relatives or neighbors. Help them clean up around the house or take them to a grocery store. Just sit with them and have a little chat, because sometimes the smallest acts mean the most.

　　Teach a friend or a relative how to use a computer or get on the Internet: how to start a blog, how to upload photos to a drugstore's website so they can be printed out, how to use an iPod and add music to iTunes. It's probably stuff you write about on your own blog anyway, so talk about it instead of writing about it, which will help you learn how to explain things verbally.

　　Donate clothes that you no longer wear or other things that you're no longer using. Someone out there will benefit from the stuff you don't need any more.

　　【写作内容】

　　1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

　　2．以约120个词谈谈你对“助人为乐”的看法，内容包括：

　　(1)阅读上文后你的感想；

　　(2)以实例说明你的观点；

　　(3)你对“帮助别人，快乐自己”的体会或评价。

　　【写作要求】

　　1．在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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　　【参考范文】读写任务 (One possible version)

　　The passage advises us to find some time to help others, such as doing the chores for our friends and relatives or teaching them how to use a computer. These little acts will improve their lives, as well as ours.

　　　For society as a whole, it is worth spending time doing charity work. And I think that what matters most is not how much we offer to people in need, but whether we are willing to give them a hand.

　　Sometimes, a little help can make a big difference. I once helped an old woman fix her mosquito net. She said to me gently, “Thank you, little girl.” It didn’t seem like a big thing, but I was shocked when I was told that the old woman never spoke a word after her only son committed suicide twenty years ago.

　　　As an old Chinese saying goes, “The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose.” Happiness lies in giving help to others.