2016届高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项练习15 生活习惯话题指导

　　2016届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题15 生活习惯话题指导

　　【写作指导】

　　急救是每个人都有可能遇到的情况， 在日常生活中，学习一些急救知识，对一个人来说很重要。

　　1. 掌握一些急救常识：1) 假如一个人发生车祸，在医生到来之前，需要对他进行医疗护理，做急救时，应注意以下二点。首先，如果他停止了呼吸，掰开他的嘴巴看看喉咙口有无食物。其次，假如他不能呼吸，就采取人工呼吸的方法，尽快使他开始呼吸。再其次，如果他伤的很重，应立即止血，然后送往医院。如果他失血过多，达三分之一，那么他有可能会死。2) 假如孩子被动物咬伤，先用自来水冲洗伤口，然后送去看医生。如果孩子被烫伤，先用自来水冲洗，降温，然后用一块干净的干布盖住伤口。3) 假如烫伤很严重，应去看医生。4) 如果割伤了手指，应先将伤口处理干净，然后用一块纸包扎伤口。

　　2. 此类文章要运用了顺序转接词分步骤地告诉我们遇到事故时应采用的方法，以及在家发生意外时的各种情况和各种应急措施。

　　3. 本文应该属于记叙文写作范畴，因此时态相对统一：多用一般现在时和一般过去时，有时为了表达的需要会在个别地方采用其他时态；一般采用客观表述，避免主观色彩；叙述格式比较固定。

　　4.用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。需要注意的是：使用上述过渡性词必须根据上下文需要的原则，力求自然，决不可牵强附会，让人感觉别扭。

　　5. 用浅显易懂的语言，通俗形象的文字表述，表述要客观准确、严谨，不能随意发挥。

　　●串联词语：fall off；first aid；breathe；ought to；mouth-to-mouth way；First Aid Centre；handkerchief；bleeding；within

　　●句型搜索：

　　1. sb. got badly injured /hurt  in the accident.

　　2. Be quick! His noise is

　　bleeding  

　　3. Don't rub the burned area，as this may break any blisters(水泡) and   the wound may get infected

　　4. It shows that a knowledge of first aid can make a real difference

　　5.It was sb’s quick action and knowledge of first aid that saved Ms Slade's life．

　　实例指导2— 介绍爱好习惯

　　写作任务:     假如你是某中学的高一学生李华,你想通过网络找一个英国笔友练习英语,交流心得体会。请根据下面表格里的内容,写一篇120词左右的短文,介绍你自己。

　　姓名 李华 性别 女 年龄 1 6 岁

　　性格 幽默、乐于助人

　　特长 英语（曾在全校英语竞赛中获第一名）

　　爱好 音乐、集邮、足球、旅游等

　　写作分析:

　　1. 本次写作任务是根据表格内容写一篇自我介绍的文章,重点介绍个人兴趣爱好,属于记叙文。时态以现在时为主。

　　2. 本文写作难点在于合理安排文章结构。因为需要写的要点较多,所以要做到条理清晰、层次分明。短文可分为三段,第一段介绍基本情况及写这篇短文的目的；第二段包括性格、特长、爱好等方面的内容,是写作重点,注意不要逐条翻译；第三段为结束段,表达想找朋友分享快乐的愿望。

　　3. 短文要着重介绍自己的兴趣爱好,因此要注意词语和句型的变换。

　　初稿:

　　My name is Li Hua, a 16-year-old girl. I’m in Grade 1 in a senior middle school. I like English and have many kinds of hobbies. So, I would like to find a pen pal to practice English. And we may share the feelings on hobbies.

　　My character is humorous. And I抦 get-ting on well with my clarssmates. After school, we often play football together. I抦 also interested in traveling, which can increase my knowledge and make me stronger. To be more important, I have made many friends by traveling. Besides, I抦 interested in music, especially pop mulasic. Above all,

　　成稿:

　　I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old girl in Senior Grade 1. Being humorous and always ready to help, I get on well with my class-mates. English is my favorite subject, so I’d like to find a pen pal to practice English. We may, at the same time, share our feelings about hobbies. I have many different kinds of hobbies.

　　After school, I often play football with my friends. And traveling always brings me happiness. At the same time, I learn many things, and my body becomes much stronger. I also have a strong interest in collecting stamps, which enriches my life too. If you have spare stamps, we may exchange them. Furthermore, I抦 fond of music, especially pop music.

　　However, all of these cannot be compared to my love for English. I once got the first place in tnhe English competition in our school.

　　If you are interested, you can get contact with me. My E-mail is Lh-808@yahoo.com. I’m looking forward to becoming your friend.

　　1. 本文巧妙地将表格所列的要点的顺序做了适当地调整,顺利引出主题:以谈自己的爱好为重点向笔友介绍自己。

　　2. 文中所用短语词汇、语法结构比较丰富,体现了作者扎实的英语功底。如:different kinds of, Being humorous and always ready to help ..., look forward to等等。另外还运用了从句。

　　Powerful Expressions:(表达爱好)

　　show / have a deep love for

　　be interested in show / have great interest in

　　be fond of

　　be keen on have a taste for

　　have a preference for... always bring me happiness

　　实战演练

　　现实生活中，每一个人都想获得成功，但在生活中并非经常出现。有的人抓住了机会，而有些人却丧失了机遇，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇120字的短文。

　　大部分机遇出现时，我们忽视了。

　　有些人知道机遇的重要性，因此抓住了成功。

　　有些人在等待机遇，而不争取。

　　机遇对每一个人都平等，只要努力和聪明就能取得成功。

　　Everyone in the world wants to succeed. As a matter of fact, opportunity comes every once in a while. On most occasions, it appears without being noticed. Only when the opportunity is away from us, do we realize that we have lost it.

　　Some people know the importance of opportunity . They understand opportunity is a factor for winning a success. So they are always ready for an opportunity when it arrives.

　　However , some other people give up their efforts to seek for and opportunity and grasp it. They are used to waiting for opportunity coming up to their doors.

　　Opportunity is equal for all, but only the more intelligent and work-hard people can finally seize it .

　　请描述漫画所反映的内容，并就此发表你的看法。字数：120-150

　　With the development of economy, Chinese people become richer. They have enough money to go abroad for travel. They feel proud when they hear Chinese is spoken in a France plane. It also makes the travelers happy when they hear the announcement is broadcast in Chinese. However, not knowing much culture in foreign countries, they experience embarrassed state in hotels, because they don’t know how to find the way to have breakfast. What’s more, some Chinese don’t think it’s important to have good about the room while they are talking to you. Last , maybe the most important , listen more than you talk.

　　Of course , in my opinion, as long as you are happy , it may be enough .

　　你们学校的英语校报招聘校园小记者,要求英语口语好,兴趣广泛。假如你叫王小英,请根据以下提示,以书信的形式写一段120词左右的个人简介去申请。1. 热情、大方、善于与人交流。2. 喜欢英语,曾经获得全市英语竞赛一等奖。3. 爱好音乐、绘画、摄影、体育等活动。

　　参考词汇:

　　申请v. apply for / n. application;

　　口语oral English

　　Dear Sir / Madam,

　　I’m Wang Xiaoying. I have learnt that our school newspaper needs an English journalist. I’m writing to apply for the post. As a warm-hearted and open-minded girl, I’m good at communicating with others. My favorite subject is English, which gives me a sense of success. My oral English is good and I once won the first prize in an English competition in our city. What’s more, I am interested in many things. For example, I enjoy music of many kinds. I’m fond of drawing and photography. I’m also a sports lover, especially ping-pong. I would be grateful if you take my application into consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Wang Xiaoying