2016高考英语二轮书面表达训练：话题作文（09）

　　训练（09）及参考范文

　　读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　My husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.

　　In the letter she wrote,“You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”

　　What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.

　　[写作内容]

　　1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

　　2.以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：

　　（1）上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师；

　　（2）举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响；

　　（3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。

　　[写作要求]

　　1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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　　【预测试题16】公益括动——【提纲类】【记叙文】

　　上周日，你斑开展以“美化城市环境，倡导低碳生活”为宗旨的志愿者活动。活动内容包括：上午去郊区植树：下午去广场宣传，分发传单。请你就这个活动为校报写一篇100-120词的短文。

　　你的文章应包括下列要点：

　　1、活动宗旨，内容及其对同学的影响

　　2、你的评论。

　　注意：1、人称：以第一人称为主；

　　2、时态：叙述活动内容用过去时态，发表自己的看法用一般现在时；

　　3、采用两段成文法，第一段叙述发生的事件，第二段发表自己的看法。

　　A voluntary activity

　　Last Sunday, our class launched a voluntary activity. Its theme is to make the city more beautiful and advocate a low-carbon lifestyle. In the morning, we went to plant trees in the suburbs. We worked in cooperation. Some dug holes, some carried and planted trees, and some watered them. In the afternoon, we went to People's Square to hand out leaflets, raising people's awareness of environmental protection. Most of the students think highly o f the activity, which wi11 surely produce a positive effect on their daily life.

　　As far as I'm concerned, it's everyone's duty to protect the environment. As long as there is the possibility of saving our planet, take action now before it is too late. Low carbon living is surly a way of great significance.

　　经典句子

　　1） In the afternoon, we went to People's Square to hand out leaflets, raising people's awareness of environmental protection.

　　2） Most of the students think highly of the activity, which wi11 surely produce a positive effect on their daily life.

　　3） A s far as I'm concerned, its everyone's duty to protect the environment.

　　4） A s long as there is the possibility of saving our planet, take action now before it is too late.

　　On Sunday mowing of October 8 our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups. The first group collected the rubbish, such as the waste paper, cigarette ends, plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of "white pollution" and the importance of protecting the environment.

　　I think it is very important for us to protect the environment. For the sake of people's health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.