四川省成都市2014高考英语 书面表达一轮训练（1）

成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（1）附参考范文

一、导语     What does beauty really mean？ Everybody has own definition. The standard of beauty changes with different society， culture and nations. Some hold the point that the beautiful appearance is of great importance， which is visible to all. Others have the idea that the spiritual beauty is the loveliest one, which lasts long. However different it might be， their opinions are all acceptable.     

什么是美呢？每个人都有自己的定义。美的标准因社会、文化和国度不同而产生差异。有的人认为相貌上的美是最重要、最直观的美，有的人则认为心灵上的美才是最可爱、最长久的美。无论哪种美，这些对美的定义都是有道理的。         二、创设情境     以“What is beauty in your mind”为主题，发表自己的看法，题目自拟。要求：1. 行文流畅，观点鲜明；2. 内容丰富，层次分明；3. 词数150左右。

三、学生习作

Beauty will buy no beef     Everyone admires beauty. Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made？If so， everybody can get beauty. As a result，there is no beauty at all.     The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world. Everyone should value it. I’d ①rather prefer nature as the standard of beauty. Just accept yourself, accept everything the god gives to you，and create the beautiful life ②belong to you.     Many heroes don’t have beautiful surface. However，their beautiful images often come to our minds. Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society.     Don’t be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking，but with a broad and kind heart.     Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an old saying goes，“Virtue is fairer than beauty.”If you have a kind heart，you own real beauty.       【点评】  本文以谚语“漂亮不能当饭吃”为题，直截了当地亮出了自己的观点。全文以“美德胜于美貌”为主线，阐述了“追求外形的美而放弃了内在的美不是真正的美”。文章观点鲜明，结构严谨，用词恰当，作者能运用谚语来强化自己的观点，有较强的英语语言组织能力和表达能力。     本文有两处语言错误：① I’d rather prefer应改为  I’d prefer。would rather表示“宁愿”，prefer也是“宁愿”的意思，两者不能连用在一起。② belong to 改为belonging to，在此处作定语。(4)(25 min.)

(2011·沈阳市高三质量检测三——改编)假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论大学生开网店的问题。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。

赞成 反对

1. 大学生时间充裕，具有丰富的网购经验；

2. 大学生思想活跃，了解时尚需求。 1. 大学生开网店浪费时间，会耽误学业；

2. 大学生缺乏经商经验，容易失败。

你的观点……

注意：

1．词数不少于120；

2．不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Editor，

Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops.

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参考范文

One possible version：

Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops.

Some students think that college students have not only enough spare time but also rich experience in online shopping. Besides, they know the trend of fashion very well, which is helpful for their jobs in the future.

Others, however, hold the opposite view that running online shops will waste a lot of time, which can definitely affect their studies. What's more, it is easier for them to fail in the business owing to the lack of experience. As a result, the failure will have a lasting influence on them.

In my opinion, college students should focus on studies first. After all, running an online shop requires much time and energy. College students should devote most of their time to studying instead of making money.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

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高考英语书面表达讲义：表格作文

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(2012·师大附中月考)假如你是红星村的李华，家乡人民决定开发农业旅游，邀请你参与策划红星生态山庄旅游项目，并请你写一篇英语文章向旅游者推介红星生态山庄。

地理位置 长沙市以北35公里处， 占地面积15平方公里；北面靠山，湘江从村边经过

主要产品 茶叶， 绿色蔬菜，鱼等

娱乐休闲项目 钓鱼，……

生态旅游有利

条件(不少于两条) ……

参考词汇： ecological village

注意： 自拟标题，词数不少于120。

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【参考范文】One possible version：

A village like no other

Do you feel tired after a week's hard work in the noisy city? Why not visit Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself?

Red Star Ecological Village is a beautiful and quiet village, located 35 kilometers north of Changsha, which only takes approximately 30 minutes' drive from the center of the city. It covers an area of 15 kilometers. It is a place where you can see many big pine trees in the mountains in the north, where you can see a lot of ducks on the Xiangjiang River, and where you can join the villagers picking up green tea leaves and growing vegetables in the garden. If you are a fishing lover, you can go fishing in the pond and barbecue what you get in the water under the big trees. It is really fantastic to enjoy your lunch in the open air with your family and friends, talking and laughing.

Whether you are looking to try green food or enjoy quiet country life, Red Star Ecological Village is the place for you. Come to Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself.

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高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）

5. 根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。

要求：1．不仅要表述出图中的内容，还要发表自己的感想；2．字数：100字左右；3．开头已给出。One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I did something about the bottle, you would think that it was I who knocked it over.”

I disagree with what the mother did in the story.

I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.

Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?

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Baloney is a kind of sausage that many Americans eat often．The word also has another meaning in English．It is used to describe something—usually something someone says—that is false or wrong or foolish．

Baloney sausage comes from the name of the Italian city，Bologna．The city is famous for its sausage，a mixture of smoked，spiced meat from cows and pigs．But，boloney sausage does not taste the same as beef or pork alone．

Some language experts think this different taste is responsible for the birth of the expression baloney．Baloney is an idea or statement that is nothing like the truth．．．in the same way that baloney sausage tastes nothing like the meat that is used to make it．Baloney is a word often used by politicians to describe the ideas of their opponents．The expression has been used for years．Fifty years ago，a former governor of New York State，Alfred Smith，criticized some claims by President Franklin Roosevelt about the successes of the Roosevelt administration．Smith said，“No matter how thin you slice is，it is still baloney．”A similar word has almost the same meaning as baloney．It even sounds almost the same．The word is blarney．It began in Ireland about 1600．The lord of Blarney castle，near Cork，agreed to surrender the castle to British troops．But he kept making excuses for postponing the surrender．And，he made them sound like very good excuses，“This is just more of the same blarney．”The Irish castle now is famous for its Blarney stone．Kissing the stone is thought to give a person special powers of speech．One who has kissed the Blarney stone，so the story goes，can speak words of praise so smoothly and sweetly that you believe them，even when you know they are false．

1．What’s the main idea of the text？(No more than 5 words)

2．According to Americans，what does baloney refer to？(No more than 8 words)

3．What do you know about the lord of Blarney castle，near Cork？(No more than 6 words)

4．Why do people kiss the Blarney stone？(No more than 6 words)

1．The other meaning of baloney．

2．It is something false or wrong or foolish．

3．He was a clever man．

4．To get special powers of speech．