四川省成都市2014高考英语 书面表达一轮训练（3）

　　成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（3）附参考范文

　　高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作

　　重点诠释：

　　1． 议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实，讲道理的方式来辩明是非曲折，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点，论据和论证三部分构成。

　　2． 在近几年的高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式是以表格式和提纲式来呈现写作材料的。

　　3． 它要求语言必须简练，准确，要尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语，可适当使用名言警句；以议论为主，辅之以叙述，说明和描写等手法。

　　4． 写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。根据题目要求，有时需要从正反两面来论述，可增强论证的力度。最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机的整体。

　　5． 写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。

　　写作典例：

　　暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。

　　  优点 缺点

　　呆在家中 花费少，舒适方便 不能亲自了解外界

　　外出旅游 增长知识，开阔眼界 花费多，旅途不便

　　注意：1。词数120左右（不含已写好部分）

　　2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述；

　　3．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　4．参考词汇：眼界horizon(view)

　　案例分析

　　这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作，它以表格的形式提出了论点（呆在家中的优点和缺点以及外出旅游的优点和缺点）和论据，还以文字提示形式提出了话题（假期计划）及需要考生自由发挥的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优，缺点，根据题目的特点，以三段式的形式来写作比较好。

　　根据内容，尽管讨论已经发生，但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论，没有特定的时间界定，因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述，这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。

　　范文：

　　The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.

　　Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.

　　In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

　　针对练习

　　1．2002年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题

　　最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

　　60%的同学认为 40%的同学认为

　　1、不应收门票

　　2、公园是公众休闲的地方

　　3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1、应收门票，但票价不宜高

　　2、支付园林工人工资

　　3、购新花木

　　注意：

　　1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee

　　One possible version:

　　Dear Editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

　　Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

　　On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　2．当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：

　　1、 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂

　　2、 读原著：细节更多、语言优美

　　3、 我的看法及理由

　　注意：1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。

　　2、参考词汇：original work 或book in the original （原著）

　　Film or book, which do you prefer?

　　Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.

　　【参考范文】One possible Version

　　Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.

　　Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.

　　Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.

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　　(2012·师大附中月考)请你简要概述图中所述资讯事件，并针对路人的反应发表自己的看法，如果你是在场的路人之一，你会怎么做？

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　　参考范文

　　One possible version：

　　Since 13th Oct., 2011, China has been captivated by the distressing case of two­year­old girl Xiao Yueyue, who was coldly ignored by passers­by as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van. Video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail, including at least 18 people walking past Xiao Yueyue's body without so much as a glance.

　　In my eyes, those 18 people have shamed the whole of China. Owing to the new complexities of Chinese social life, people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death.

　　Any one of us might become the ‘passer­by’ at the side of Xiao Yueyue. If I were one of them, I would stop, move her out of the center of the road, or extend a hand of comfort, carrying her away from danger. Everybody should examine his own conscience: if we were in the same situation next time, how could we help ourselves? Only by lifting a hand to help others, we save ourselves.

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　　高考英语：写作综合训练集

　　写作话题议论篇

　　诚信是处世之本。但是在中学生当中，考试作弊、抄袭作业、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。请你对以上种种现象作简要描述，并以How to guarantee honesty为题，从三个方面，谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。

　　注意：

　　1．词数：120左右；

　　2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　How to guarantee honesty

　　As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, …

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　　Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

　　【参考范文】------One possible version:

　　As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others’ homework and fool their teachers and parents. Therefore, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.

　　Personally, I think honesty education is necessary. For instance, courses on honesty can be offered to students; activities like story-telling and lectures are also worthy trying. With the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. Besides, related rules and regulations should be laid down. Detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.Then, strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time.

　　Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

　　本文是一篇开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“How to guarantee honesty”,话题非常切合学生实际生活，让每个学生都有话可写。此题留给学生了一定的想象空间，有利于优生的发挥。文章的人称以一、三人称为主；时态为一般现在时；本文可用三段成文形式成文。内容要点： 1. 学生中存在的作弊现象；2. 解决这一现象的方法；3. 总结要点。

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　　高考英语：写作综合训练集

　　请你根据右面表格中的内容写一篇英语短文，介绍2010年上海世博会的情况。

　　注意：

　　1．短文需包括表格中的全部内容，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

　　2．词数：100左右。

　　参考词汇：

　　世博会the World Expo；遗产heritage；促进promote

　　时间 2010年5月1日至10月31日

　　地点 上海

　　主题 Better City，Better Life

　　规模 占地面积5．28平方公里，200多个国家及组织参展

　　目的 1．保护城市遗产，关注城市发展

　　2．寻求发展中国家城市的发展模式

　　3．促进人类社会的交流和理解

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　　【参考范文】---One possible version:

　　From May 1st to October 31st, 2010, Shanghai will be the focus of the whole world, for the World Expo is to be held there and then．Its theme is “Better City, Better Life”．

　　The large garden, which covers 5．28 square kilometers, will attract more than 200 countries and organizations to take part．There will be three main things to be done at the Expo．The first one is how to protect city heritage and concern about the development of cities．The second is to seek for the best way for city development in the developing countries．The last aims at promoting the communication and understanding of human society．

　　Shanghai is well prepared to welcome friends from all over the world．

　　本文是一篇介绍上海世博会的说明文。文章应使用第三人称it或Shanghai；文章的时态应用一般现在时。根据表格内容按一定的逻辑顺序展开介绍，把总体概括性内容划为第一段，重点、核心内容放在第二段，最后总结全文。