四川省成都市2014高考英语 书面表达一轮训练（6）

　　成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（6）附参考范文

　　                             A good face is a letter of recommendation    Some people say beauty is just a skin deep. I don’t quite agree with them. Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, competition， finding jobs and so on. Not only can good appearance help you become more confident， but also it helps you be impressed. If you want to get a good job，the first sight is important. Physical beauty is probable to draw much attention.     However，we have to face this problem. We have no right to choose our appearance. When necessary，we can make up ourselves. If you think doing this is a good way to improve your confidence，just do what you really want to regardless ②others’ opinion. It is worth all the money and time. Facing a variety of social pressures，we young people should build confidence. Confidence is the key to success.    In a word，you may not be the most beautiful one，but you can be the most attractive one；you may not the best one，but you can be the most confident one. Show yourself and chances will kiss you in time. 

       【点评】 爱美之心人皆有之。我们追求美，创造美，一副好脸孔就是一封介绍信，作者围绕这一主题进行阐述。在现代社会里，美丽的外表在社交、竞争、求职等方面有着不可低估的作用。作者立意大胆，构思巧妙，很有个性。文章叙述清楚，层次分明，过渡自然。在语言表达上，运用倒装句、排比句等句式，增强了文章的感染力。    文中语言错误有两处： probable改为likely。probable不能用某人或某物作主语，常用it作形式主语，构成it is probable for sb. to do sth.结构。 regardless之后加of。regardless of是复合介词，意为“不理会、不顾”。 

　　1．当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。

　　2．诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。

　　这是一篇论说文，从题目看，应从正面论证诚实的益处。第一段，举例说明在社会上存在的诸多不诚实现象，给社会和个人都造成了极大的伤害。第二段，从正面说明诚实既利人又利己，通过举例说明做人应该诚实。

　　参考范文：

　　As society and economy develop, dishonesty is no longer a stranger to us. Manufacturers and businessmen may promise more than their products can guarantee so as to make more profit. Doctors and nurses may lie to their patients for their patients' benefit. Students may cheat on exams for better scores. As a matter of fact, dishonesty has become so widespread that wherever you are you find cases of dishonesty.

　　However, it is honesty that brings benefit both to yourself and to others. By being honest, manufacturers and businessmen build up mutual trust between themselves and customers, which in the long run generates more profit. By telling patients the truth about their conditions so that they can make their own decisions, doctors and nurses enhance their own credibility and honor their profession. By giving honest answers to questions, not only can students themselves learn about their own strengths and weaknesses, but they help their teachers evaluate the quality of their instruction as well. Therefore, it pays to be honest and everybody must learn to be honest.

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　　高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作

　　　6. My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations(我对考试作弊的看法) 整理

　　目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：

　　主要原因 考试偏多、偏难[

　　不用功、懒惰

　　取悦父母、老师

　　个人看法 作弊不对，违反校规

　　要诚实，努力学习

　　……（其他看法）

　　注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

　　2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　　3．词数：100左右。

　　4．参考词汇：作弊cheat（v.）

　　My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

　　It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

　　My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

　　It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

　　As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations whichare too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don't work hard at our lessons. So when taking examinations, some students sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

　　In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it break the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What's more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations. (121 words)

　　我对考试作弊的看法

　　大家都知道一些学生考试作弊。作为学生我们经常参加各种考试。有时有些考试对我们来说太难了。另一方面，我们中有些人学习不用功，所以当他们参加考试时，他们为拿高分去取悦父母和老师有时就会作弊。

　　依我看，作弊不对，违反校规。我们学生应当诚实，用努力学习采取得好成绩，而不是依靠作弊。还有我们要改进学习方法，为考试做好充足准备。

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　　高考英语：写作综合训练集-------B

　　请仔细观察下面两幅图画，理解其含义，然后就“人与自然”这一话题写一篇英语短文。

　　注意:

　　1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　2. 词数：120左右。

　　A One possible version：

　　Nature is to us what water is to fish. Yet we don’ t always realize it until it is too late. With the development of modern technology, there are more and more people on the earth and fewer and fewer resources left. What’s worse, pollution is getting more and more serious and the climate is becoming warmer and warmer. So we must do something to protect not only our next generation but also ourselves. As is shown in the pictures, we plant trees and we will enjoy the shade ourselves as well as our grandchildren. If we do something good to nature, it will do more to us.

　　本题是一篇议论类看图写话。本文应用第一人称、时态用一般现在时。内容要点：1.论述人与自然的关系；2.结合图画进一步阐述人与自然关系的重要意义。本文也可采取下面的写作方式：1.介绍图画的基本内容并引出论点；2.根据前文的论点展开论述。

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　　高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）

　　10. 下面的饼状图（pie chat）显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文，报道你的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。词数120左右。首句已给出（不计入词数）。

　　A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. From the pie chat, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it. Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, take reading as a hobby. And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.

　　In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.

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　　高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）

　　11. 阅读下面漫画，先对漫画的内容进行描述，然后对这一现象发表自己的看法。（100词左右） 参考词汇：

　　西瓜皮：

　　water-melon skin

　　长凳：bench

　　The boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eating a water-melon. When they went away they left the melon’s skin on the bench, making it very dirty. They didn’t want to take any trouble to throw it into the dustbin although it was very near where they were sitting. Instead, they said that there would be someone who should clean the rubbish.

　　However, what they did makes others look down upon them. If everyone behaves in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a world of diseases. Besides, it will be impossible for dustmen to clean the world woth such people living in it.

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　　高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类

　　I. 应用文类

　　1. 外籍教师Lynne任教期满准备回国，学校答应派车送她去机场。她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师：

　　1)．请检查(check on)明天的车是否落实，提醒司机(remind sb. of sth.提醒某人做某事)。

　　2)．她之所以要确定一下，是因为太早不好叫出租车。 3)．感谢费心，并感谢一年来的关心。

　　4)．在学校一年来，生活愉快、难忘，很可能再来。

　　5)．留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆，希望对学生有用。

　　字数：100—120个词。

　　Hi, Mr. Li,

　　Could you please check on the car to take me to the airport? Please remind the car driver of this. I want to be sure of this car, because it will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if the school car doesn’t show up. I am sorry to trouble you again. Here I thank you again for all that you have done for me during my stay in your school. I really enjoy teaching here, and will never forget the day I spent with my students. Probably I will come back some day. I leave some English books to your library. I hope they will be useful to your students.

　　Yours

　　Lynne

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　　高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类

　　2. 假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成迁出：反对迁出：．游客多，交通堵塞．建于1906年，中外闻名．郊区环境好．搬迁易造成动物死亡注意：1．词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。2)．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3)．参考词汇： 郊区—suburbJune 3 ,2005Dear Editor ,Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well –known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

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