四川省成都市2014高考英语 书面表达一轮训练（7）

成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（7）附参考范文

假如你叫王方，乘出租车时丢了手提箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。

内容要点：1． 上午11点钟到达机场，然后带着5件行李乘一辆黄色出租车到假日酒店（Holiday Inn）；2． 到达酒店后，发现由于粗心将手提箱遗失在出租车上。不幸的是，未注意到出租车的车牌号；3． 60cm×40cm×16cm；4． 2,000美元的支票；5． 你的联系电话是：0435-3940526。

1. 词数100左右；2. 文章的开头已为你写好。

My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am...

My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five luggages. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didn't notice the taxi's licence.

The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetre by 40 centimetre by 16 centimetre. In it, there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three pieces of shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check of 2,000 dollars.

Could the finder make relation with me? My telephone number is 0435-3940526.

1. 第一段第3句：luggage为不可数名词，five luggages表达不正确，可改为five pieces of luggage。

2. 第一段第5句：licence意为"执照"，不是"牌照"，故the taxi's licence可改为the number of the taxi。

3. 第二段第2句：表示度量单位的centimetre为可数名词，应把三个 centimetre都改为centimetres。

4. 第二段第3句：In it过于简短，不必在其后停顿，其后逗号应去掉。

5. 第二段第3句：shirt是可数名词， three pieces of shirts表达不正确，应改为three shirts。

6. 第二段第4句：表示价值时，通常用介词for，故of最好改为for。

7．第三段第1句：make relation with me表达不正确。习作者想表达"与我取得联系"，可改为get in touch with me或return the suitcase to me。

My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five pieces of luggage. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didn't notice the number of the taxi.

The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetres by 40 centimetres by 16 centimetres. In it there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check for 2,000 dollars.

Could the finder get in touch with me? My telephone number is 0435-3940526.

Thank you.

Wang Fang

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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作

7．The Most Important Thing in the World / money is everything

Directions：

A）Title：The Most Important Thing in the World

B）提示：有人认为，世界上最重要的东西是“钱”。许多人不同意这个看法。

请就这个问题谈谈你的意见。

C）Time limit：30minutes

D）Word limit：150～200words

E）Your composition must be written clearly on the Composition Sheet.

The Most Important Thing in the World

In my opinion，the most important thing in the world is TIME. However long one may live，his life consists of a certain number of years，and a year has only12months，a month30days and one day24hours.Once you waste one hour，you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.

Even though you are the richest person in the world，you can not afford to waste your time，because it means that you are wasting your life.Even though you are the most powerful person in the world，one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society.

Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money.In their opinion，if you have enough money，you will have everything you want.I would like to ask them a simple question：Can you buy time？

The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.If you work with high efficiency，you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.

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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作

8．高考英语(江西卷)

人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法

1．广交朋友

2．可自由表达思想

3．利于外语学习 1．浪费时间

2．影响学习

3．可能上当受骗 ？

留意：1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容。

2．词数为100左右。

3．参考词汇： 网络朋友on-line friend(s)，上当受骗to be cheated

开头：Should students make friends on line ? 展开：Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. 展开：Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.

结尾：It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

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高考英语书面表达写作指导---议论文

引段

高考英语议论文的引言可以有两部分组成：现象+观点。

现象就来自作文题目。所以学生必须要理解题目中的每句话，把题目中的中文用英语表达出来就能成为不错的开篇。然后再开门见山地亮出自己的观点。

主体段

引证法(即引用一些名人名言、成语、格言、谚语灯作为论据)；

例证法(即举例来进行论证 )

喻证法(用比喻的方法来论证事理，把深奥、抽象的事理表述得浅显易懂，使文章既生动又形象 )

对比论证法(通过对事物的正反两个方面的对比来分析论证，使文章的表达效果更强烈，给人留下深刻印象 )

归纳法 (从分析典型，即分析个别事物入手，找出事物的共同特点，然后得出结论。)

推理法 (从一般原理出发，对个别事物进行说明、分析，而后得出结论)

驳论法 (先列出错误的观点，然后加以逐条批驳，最后阐明自己的观点)。

在主体段中，务必要牢记应采用先总后分的手法——先亮出主题句，然后再用发展句充实段落。你必须围绕着引言段的观点展开，千万不能让人觉得的的文章段落之间没有衔接。

此外，在主体段中要恰当地使用过渡词，有明显的层次感，引领阅读者一层一层地根据你的分论点走向最终你要阐述的观点。

结尾段

结论，用一、二句话来结束文章，做到首尾呼应。一定要再次澄清你的观点，切记与引言段的观点一致，建议用不同的词句法表达一个意思。

(四)、英语议论文范文

Private Tutors

With the development od science and society, more and more students are keen to take on private tutors.

Some people think taking on a private tutor is good for students in some ways.

The tutor can answer the students’questions individually and carefully and give them detailed advice; some private tutors assign their students more exercises to do and the students will learn extra knowledge from their tutors; it is known to us all that a good and experienced teacher can help his students to review their lessons in a very good way so that they can have a better understanding of the knowledge learned in class, which is help to them in their examinations.

But every coin has two sides.

Some people look upon it with disapproval.

They hold the opinion that the students rely too much on their tutor and they even take little notice of what their own teacher says in class; the private tutor assigns them to do a lot of extra exercises, thus occupying plenty of rheir spare time and they will be too worn out;

contrary to what their parents hope, their studies become worse than before.

So it is hard to say whether taking on a private tutor is good or not.

It all depends on the individual.

But in my opinion, if you want to take on a private tutor, you should choose one carefully since he or she will have a great impact on your studies.

Money for Education

In my opinion, it is worthwhile to spend more of the money in order to have the children better educated.

First, as there are more than 40 or even 50 students in a class, in most cases,

teachers can not take care of all the students in class.

Therefore many students have to attend spare time classes or even go to the tutors to make up for this.

Second, we are now in the 21st century.

With the development of society, only those who have a good education are more likely to get good jobs.

So the more we learn now, the more chances we will have in the future.

Of course we will get a high pay.

In a word, spending money on education is certainly rewarding.

III. Post-task

( Each composition 120-150

words)

请你谈谈在学习上遇到困难时，如何想办法去解决，如何克服这些困难？

IV. Sentence patterns:

The point is that….

From my point of view…

As for me…

As far as I am concerned…

We must recognize that…

There is no doubt that…

The main reason is that…

As we all know…

V. Summary:

VI. Assignment: ( Each composition 120-150

words)

1.每一位高三的学生都面临着巨大的压力。对压力，高三的学生看法不一，有的害怕压力；但有的却认为压力不是件坏事。请你谈谈你的看法。

2 .2010年世博会将在上海举行。为了办好这次国际盛会，上海市将进一步改善环境。与此同时， 提高市民的素质和修养也势在必行，因为文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要。作为年轻人，我们自身也存在着一些不文明行为。请例举你所观察到的2-3种不文明行为（如：大小便后不及时冲刷；随地乱扔纸屑、废物；随地吐痰；插队…）并就此做出评论或提出建议。

Feed-back

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高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）

12. 根据以下图画再结合你的想象，写出一篇100字左右的短文：

It is the old man’s birthday today. Now he is sitting on a sofa alone. Maybe his wife has been dead. On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left. Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy. Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.

Our life is getting better and better than before. Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. I think they are quite wrong. Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do. So we should spend as much time together with them as we can and take care of them in every possible way.

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