郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（9）附参考范文

　　郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（9）附参考范文

　　高考英语：短文改错专项练习

　　Calvin Coolidge, 30th president of the United States, was famous for a man of few words. He knew what he should talk and when he should not. It was very hard of anyone to enjoy talking with him. One evening he was inviting to dinner. A lady sitting next to him past the sugar for his coffee. “Mr President,” she said.”Today a friend of me said that I couldn’t get much than two words out of you. I said I can, and we made a bet.” “You lose,” answered the president.

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　　6. _______ 7. _______   

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　　Key: 1. 在30th前加the。序数词前应加定冠词。2. for改为as。be famous for ...为……而出名；be famous as ...作为……而出名。3. what改为when。从下文and when的信息可知。4. 把of改为for。It is +adj. +for sb. to do...为固定用法。5. 将inviting改为invited。应为被动语态。6. past改为passed。 pass为动词，而past为介词。7. 将me改为mine。我的一个朋友，应说a friend of mine。8. 把much改成more than为搭配。9. can改为could。为时态错，从said可知。10. 正确。(2012湖北孝感一次统考)

　　请根据下面提示，结合你的校园生活中的一个事例，就英语格言“Failure is the mother of success.”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。

　　In fact，there aren't always bright sunshine and gentle breeze，birds' singing and flowers' fragrant in our daily life.We have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success，but life is what you make it.

　　注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③词数为120左右。

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　　参考范文

　　One possible version：

　　Success will be gained after times of failure so long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing.That is the message carried in the proverb “Failure is the mother of success”．

　　For example，when I began to learn English，I was slow and clumsy that I read the words wrong from time to time.My poor pronunciation made myself laughed at by my classmates.But I didn't give up and kept practising reading aloud English every day.And my teacher gave me a helping hand，getting me right whenever I made an error.

　　In a word，as long as we don't lose heart and keep on trying，we are sure to go through failure and achieve our aims.

　　下面短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9: 00 am, I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10: 00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took to us about two hours to see it. Having seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some friends even burst out tears. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again. What a happy day!

　　I hope tomorrow I will be even happier!

　　答案解析*****短文改错

　　Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9: 00 am, is

　　I

　　go

　　to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t

　　went

　　were

　　know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10: 00, we went

　　which

　　to ∧ cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were

　　the

　　and

　　waiting outside the booking office. It took to us about two hours to see it. Having

　　seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some friends even burst

　　out

　　moved

　　into(或tears改为crying )

　　tears. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again. What a happy day!

　　well

　　I hope tomorrow I will be even happier!

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　　高考英语书面表达讲义：环境资源话题作文

　　例1：近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：

　　有人建议

　　你的建议

　　1、不浪费粮食和纸张

　　2、尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋

　　3、毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用?

　　注意：

　　1、不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节;

　　2、词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数;

　　3、参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks

　　Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.

　　Some students suggest that we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.

　　Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.

　　例2：假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓生态游，你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看法写出来。

　　所谓的生态游

　　欣赏风景，享受新鲜空气

　　有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾

　　真正的生态游

　　享受自然，同时也是一种责任

　　要保护自然，保护野生动物

　　带走美好回忆，留下青山绿水

　　Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing.. Some even tried to catch the birds they saw. What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there. The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.

　　I don't think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.

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　　7. 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。

　　上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；

　　中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；

　　下午与我校学生游览海河。

　　注意：

　　1. 次数不少于100；

　　2. 可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

　　3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。

　　参考词汇：

　　海河 the Haihe River

　　Dear Mr Smith

　　I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. ___________

　　【参考范文】

　　7.Dear Mr. Smith,

　　I am Li Hua, chairman of the student Union, from Chenguang High School .We’re very glad to know you’ll come to our school on June 26th, and now it’s my pleasure to introduce our schedule to you. In the morning, you’ll have a talk with the students of our school. The topic includes school life, the difference between Chinese culture and American culture. Next, we’ll have lunch together at noon and you will eat typical Chinese food, such as jiaozi, noodles. After that, together with us students, you’ll have a trip to the Haihe River in the afternoon. That’s the plan for your visit. If you have any other question, please let me know.

　　Best wishes to you.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

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　　作文（***）

　　某家中学生英文杂志以交通安全为题向读者征文，请你根据下列图画中UncleLi的一次经历写一篇短文应征，短文可以适当增减细节。

　　词数：100左右。

　　生词：三轮车tricycle． 昏迷losecomsciousness

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　　参考范文

　　The other day Uncle Li left the bus station with a heavy box on his shoulder. Just then a young man riding a tricycle came and asked Uncle Li to pay four yuan for riding him home. On the way Uncle Li asked him to ride slowly, but he just smiled and rode even faster. Suddenly the tricycle turned over. The young man was badly hurt and lost consciousness. Uncle Li was slightly hurt in the forehead. They were sent to hospi- tal. Coming out of the hospital, Uncle Li made up his mind to take a bus.

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　　(201*·河南五校联考)

　　After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________

　　look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________

　　found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________

　　I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________

　　He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________

　　studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________

　　his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.___ _____

　　will go through the job­hunting talk today and he would8.________

　　take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________

　　what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________

　　答案与解析：

　　1．去掉the　finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。

　　2．month→months　month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。

　　3．interested后加in　be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。

　　4．him→himself　calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。

　　5．do→did　根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。

　　6．√

　　7．beaten→beating　a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。

　　8．will→would　这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。

　　9．surprised→surprise　to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。

　　10．said后加was　what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。

　　【命题趋向】

　　短文改错是一项主要测试考生的判断能力，观察能力、纠错能力语言基础知识及语言的综合运用能力。

　　短文改错的趋势：

　　1.改错短文以记叙文和说明文为主 。

　　2.文章内容贴近学生生活，没有生僻词汇和复杂的结构，文章简单易懂，错误设置也很简单，多为学生平常作文中常出现的错误。

　　3.短文一般100词左右，错误有9处。

　　4.常见错有三种:错词、多词、 缺词。错词占60%左右

　　【错误类型】

　　1. 错词 2.

　　多词 3.

　　缺词 4. 正错

　　【考点透视】

　　一．错词的热点

　　动词—时态 语态 非谓语 ；主谓关系。

　　联系词—关系代词和关系副词；连词；连接词。

　　名词—可数名词 、不可数名词，可数名字的单复数变化。

　　介词—介词和动词的搭配错误。

　　形容词/副词—词类错用。

　　冠词—定冠词和不定冠词的错用。

　　代词—人称代词；物主代词；反身代词。

　　惯用法—固定句型，固定短语。

　　二．多词和缺词热点

　　1. 冠词

　　2.介词

　　3.副词

　　4.代词

　　5.关联词

　　6.小品词 to

　　【短文改错主要特点1. 语言材料取自于学生的

　　2. 短文为话题或学生身边事

　　3. 短文难度符合学生水平

　　4. 语言简单易懂

　　5. 没有生僻的语言现象或繁难的语句结构