2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（12）附参考范文

　　2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（12）附参考范文

　　高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文

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　　(2012·浏阳一中月考)假如你是中学生李华。在一位名叫WolfDad的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

　　I'm the father of a fourteen­year­old boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong?

　　写作要点：

　　1. 表明自己的看法；

　　2. 陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；

　　3. 提出至少两条建议。

　　写作要求：

　　1. 短文字数不少于120(不含已写好的部分)；

　　2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；

　　3. 书写须清晰、工整。

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　　【参考范文】One possible version：

　　Hi, WolfDad,

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all­A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

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　　(2012·醴陵月考)几个月后你将从这里毕业，迈向新的征程。假如你必须进入社会，参加工作，请根据自己的情况，以“My ideal job”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

　　内容包括：

　　1. 你理想的工作；

　　2. 你的理由。

　　注意：不少于120词。

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　　参考范文

　　One possible version：

　　Time flies. I have been studying here for more than two years and will graduate. Because of my poor family, I will have to look for a job and begin my career.

　　What should I do? I would like to be a hairdresser. Firstly, I have been interested in hairstyles, so I like to observe, enjoy and study different hairstyles of different boys, girls, ladies and gentlemen and can understand what styles different people like best. Secondly, my sister has been a hairdresser for many years. She has rich experience and can help me learn how to be a hairdresser as soon as possible. So it's easy for me to begin my career.

　　Once I begin the job, I will work hard and make every effort to develop more hairstyles, letting more people enjoy their wonderful person styles.

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　　下列图描述的是Mr．and Mrs white购物后，到停车场取车时发生了一场误会。请用英语将下列图示叙述清楚。短文必须包括图画的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯完整。

　　词数80—100。

　　参考范文

　　After shopping, Mr. and Mrs. White went back to the car park. Mr. White carried a lot of packets in his arms. And just as his hands were full, Mrs. White asked him where he put his key to the car. He told her that it was in his pocket. But she was unable to find the key in his right pocket. Mr. White told her it was in his left pocket and she got it. But when she was unlocking the door, the key just didn't fit in it. Mr. White was wondering what had gone wrong, when the owner of the car came up, asking angrily, "What are you doing to my car?" It was then that they realized it was a wrong car that was exactly like theirs.

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　　White answered, "We are very sorry, we've made a mistake."

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　　（广东卷）写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节：基础写作

　　以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道

　　基本信息：

　　书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

　　作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授

　　出版时间：2010年

　　内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事

　　效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论

　　相关报道：

　　中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售

　　意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法

　　最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛**和耶鲁录取

　　*耶鲁：Yale

　　哈佛：Harvard

　　[写作内容]

　　根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：

　　1.图书的基本信息

　　2.图书的相关报道

　　[写作要求]

　　只能用5个句子表达全部内容

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　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯The books with Chinese edition were sold in China at the beginning of the 2011. As a result, it caused a heated discussion on which is better, the Chinese way or American. Accidently, most of the Chinese mothers are not in favour of what the writer did. However, the latest news shows that her 17-year-old daughter was admitted into Harvard and Yale University.

　　2011年广东省高考英语基础写作是一篇说明文，让考生对Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother这本书进行介绍。今年的基础写作题材较新，有些考生可能不知道虎妈教育孩子的事情，但不影响本文写作，考生只把它当作一本图书介绍即可。

　　试题详细地给出了内容要点，为控制性写作。在文章结构方面，一定要紧扣考题已给出的写作提示：1.图书的基本信息；2.图书的相关报道。要写好此文，考生需要注意四点：一、要认真审题，确定体裁、人称和时态等；二、要运用适当的句型，合理地组织文字；三、切忌照译，要适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。四、在句型方面，为了用五个句子表达全部内容，复合句的使用依然是考查的重点。

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　　高考英语作文（经典好句）

　　（二）中间段落句

　　1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

　　On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.

　　2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

　　But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.

　　3……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

　　______is necessary and important to our countries development and construction.

　　First，______.What’s more, _____.Most important of all,______.

　　4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

　　There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______

　　5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，

　　Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______

　　6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

　　It is high time that something was done about it. For example, _____.In addition, _____.All these measures will certainly______.

　　7. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

　　Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is

　　______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.

　　8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

　　However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own

　　disadvantages, such as ______.

　　9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

　　Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.

　　10. 完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：

　　I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.

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