湖南省长沙县实验中学2016届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题07 建议申请话题指导（学生版）

　　实例指导1—求职申请

　　Dear sir,

　　My name is Li Ming . I’d like to apply be one of the envioremental protection volunteers for the 2010 Shanghai World Exposition.

　　I'm a 20 year-old boy of Jinan. And I'm quite familar with the city of Shnaghai . Being a college student, I have a good knowledge of environmental protection. I believe I can make reasonable suggestions about how to solve environmental problems.

　　In my opinion, traffic lines should be arranged by the government, plastic bags should be replaced by cloth bags and waste should be sorted and dealt with. Only in this way can we

　　beautify the environment of Jinan and make the 2010 Shanghai World Exposition a successful event.

　　If I have the honor to be a volunteer, I will work hard to make contributions to the the 2010 Shanghai

　　World Exposition.

　　I'm looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Ming

　　实例指导2—征求建议

　　【写作任务】

　　假如你是Amy，你所在的城市要修一座地铁，现在面向社会广泛征求意见。作为一名中学生，请你给设计师写封信告诉他你的建议；希望他至少能考虑以下几点，并说明你的理由：

　　1．地铁的入口和出口标牌要醒目；

　　2．通往地铁的台阶应用电梯代替。

　　要求：词数120—150，可以适当加以扩展。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Sir/ Madame

　　I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions for the subway that will be built. For a smoothly-flowing subway I would like to suggest the following.

　　First, more outstanding entrances and exits to subway stations should be provided. It is usual that entrances and exits are hard to find since they are almost hidden at the corner of the street. Besides, directing signs are easily left unnoticed because of many advertisements. Second, it would be better to replace traditional steps with lifts to make it convenient for the elders and even for the disabled．Furthermore，lifts help save time．

　　Looking forward to the improvement of the subway and wishing you all the success．

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Amy

　　实例指导3—如何写好规劝性质的书信

　　【写作任务】

　　徐敏同学是一名高三学生，英语成绩很优秀，她的一名笔友李丽来信希望她给她提供一些建议如何写好英语，为此徐敏给她写了一封回信，在信中她提了很多的建议

　　First of all, you should know clearly what you study for. As we know, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. To be a capable person in your future life, you must learn English well.

　　Secondly , I think the basic thing to do is to memorize as many English words as possible. When you come across new words, you should write them down again and again .

　　Thirdly , you should read out English texts loudly every morning, learn phrases, useful expressions and sentence patterns. They are helpful in improving speaking and writing as well.

　　Last , grammar is also very important. You ought to listen to the teacher' s lectures carefully in class. When you have trouble, you must ask for help in time .

　　Yours faithfully

　　Xumin

　　实战演练

　　假如你是Tom，你从报纸上得知政府正在积极努力解决人们的社业问题，请你给《学英语》报社的编辑写一封信，建议政府专门设立一个机构来帮助残疾人就业，并提出原因和方法。

　　要点如下：

　　1．就业竞争激烈，残疾人容易被忽视；

　　加入你是一名残疾学校的学生王兵，你们城市准备建造新的体育馆，你写信给建筑师李先生，提供一些建议，期中也包括一些有利于残疾人的建议。注意：

　　1．在城市的北面，那里方便。

　　2．至少要放下2万人。

　　3．要留给残疾人座位和通道。

　　体育馆：gymnasium

　　字数：120－150 。

　　【思路指导】

　　1．在历年高考中，英语试题中的书面表达题考查最多的应用文为书信形式。而内容有很多又是关于很多疑惑问题的请教或解答。

　　2．故掌握英文书信的写法对考生来讲非常必要。英文书信，通常包括以下几个部分，即：信头、称呼、正文、谦称和结束语、签名。

　　3．本文是一个以学生的身份写信，因此语言要客气、委婉。

　　4．时态以一般现在时态和将来时态为主。

　　【学习习作】

　　Dear Mr. Li I am a student in a disability school . It is very glad for me to have a chance to write to you, a famous architect.

　　I hear a big gymnasium will be put up in our city and you are the leading architect . As a sport fan , I want to give suggestions to you . Firstly , I think it should be in the north of the city , as it is convenient for citizens ,especially for our disabled men . Secondly , I think it will be good if it is a very big , and I think it can hold over 20,000 people . Last , the important suggestion , it should have many seats for our disabled sports fans , and it should there be a way for us to enter the gymnasium.

　　I heartily wish you may consider my these suggestions . And I am looking forward to the wonderful gymnasium.

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　下面是刊登在《中国日保》上的一则关于招聘销售经理的广告，假如你有意应聘，请仔细阅读这则广告，然后写一篇120左右的求职信。

　　We are looking for a competent person to fill the position of Sales Manager.

　　Requirements:

　　College graduate majoring in Marketing in Marketing Management.

　　Some experience in the marketing field

　　Out going personality

　　Able to communicate with people of different levels and communication skills in both English and Chinese.

　　Good knowledge in PC operation

　　Interested in it, please contact with Mr. Johnson at johnson@sina.com

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Johnson,

　　假设你是李华。学校的广播站最近要从在校生中招聘一名英文广播员，条件是：热爱播音工作，热心为同学服务，英语口语好，有一定的播音知识和经验者优先。请你给广播站王老师写信应聘。词数：120――150 左右。

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　I'm glad to know that our school radio station will choose one broadcaster recently. I'm a student

　　from senior two, and now I'm writing to apply for the

　　position.

　　I'm fond of the work of broadcasting and I am willing to serve all of our schoolmates, providing them with wonderful English programs over the radio. First of all, I'm good at English, especially at spoken English. I won the first prize for the School Spoken English Contest last year. In addition, when I was in primary school, I worked for the school radio station, which gained me rich experience in this field. Therefore , I'm sure to get along well with my work if I can get the chance..

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　Dear Sir / Madame,

　　Having read your ad in the newspaper, I hope to get the job as an English secretary in your company. My name is Yang Qian, a healthy girl of 28 and I am 1.66 meters tall. I am the Bachelor of English, and can speak fluent English and can write in English as well as read all kinds of articles in English. What’ s more, skillful in operating Words, I can type 130 words per minute. With two years’ relevant experience in a company, I could make myself generally useful, if there should be any opportunity of your requiring my services. As an open, warm-hearted and easy-going person, I hope I am the kind of person you want and I’d appreciate your calling me at 010-89347521. Or, my E-mail is: yangqian@sina.com. Best wishes!

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Yours

　　sincerely,

　　  Yang Qian