【课堂新坐标】2017届高考英语（通用版）二轮复习书面表达专题训练：技法7 画龙点睛的结束语（含解析）

　　技法7| 画龙点睛的结束语

　　结束语即结尾。一篇英语作文如果结尾写得好就会强化阅卷老师对你所写作文的好感从而给你的作文打高分。1. 如何写好结尾？结尾有概括全文内容进一步强调或肯定1)照应开头t unusual experiences in our life.

　　(2)复现主题(3)总结式(4)引用式lieve my dream will come true one day because “Where there is a will, there is a way.”

　　(5)希望式(6)问题式 you join us in the next century? How romantic and fantastic it will be!

　　2．书信的结束语书信的结束语我们见到最多的是I'm looking forward to .../Looking forward to ...。另外我们还可以使用一些功能句式向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候表达愿望或期待等。除了I'm looking forward to ...之外常用的结束语还有：求职信可说：I would be grateful if you would consider my application.咨询信可说：I'm waiting for your early reply.感谢信可说：I must thank you again for your generous help.nd always.

　　建议信可说：In the end, I'll appreciate you taking my suggestion into account.

　　投诉信可说：I'd appreciate it if you ... as soon as possible.邀请信可说：I'm longing to hear from you.

　　(2016·全国乙卷)假定你是李华resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意：1.词数100左右；可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。考生作文 点评与优化 作文提升If you can help meyour reply as early as possible. [名师点评](1)表达档次较低本来是一个很好的表达方式也由于early的错用而大打折扣(应为as soon as possible)。(2)very thank you与hear from your reply更是汉语式英语属于低级的错误。[尝试优化](高考范文)Looking forward to your reply.And I'd be really thankful.(满分作文)I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.ard to your early reply.

　　一、应用文写作A(邀请信)(2016·银川市模拟)假如你是李华请按如下提示给外教Smith写一封信邀请他参加你校50周年校庆晚会。晚会时间：9月208点至10点；晚会地点：青少年活动中心(大学路与兴华街交叉口东北角)；晚会节目：自拟(至少3条)；座位安排：3区4排6号。注意：1.词数100左右；　 　2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；　 　3.开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】　ool's 50th anniversary. Here is the information in detail.

　　As scheduled, the performance is due to start at 20 o'clock and end at 22 o'clock on September 20. You are arranged to sit in seat 6, row 4, section 3 where you can feast your eyes.

　　At the party, folk songs will be performed, poem recitation and students' group dance included.

　　By the way, you can take bus No.4 to the party venue, the Youth Activity Center located northeast of the crossroads where Xinghua Street meets University Road.

　　Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　B(建议信)(2016·东北师大附中模拟)假如你是李华你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发3月9日是Peter的生日想送他一个礼物来缓和关系修复友情特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件：礼物选择； 2.你的理由；3.其他和解建议。注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。ua

　　【参考范文】　e exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally－friendly means of transport. It's convenient for him to get around as well.ver.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　C(申请信)(2016·黑龙江省实验中学模拟)假设你是高中生李华你校校园网招收英文网络编辑(web editor)请根据以下提示用英语向外籍Chris 申请这一职位。要点包括：关心时事对资讯工作感兴趣；有做校刊记者的工作经历；擅长英语曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。注意：1.词数100左右；可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】　tor, which I saw advertised on our school website.I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism.I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. I'm good at English. Once I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school. In addition, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.

　　I look forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　D(投诉信)(2016·潍坊市统考)假定你是李华寒假前从海外网站订购了英语原版小说货到后你打开包装发现有问题。请用英文给店主Alice女士写封电子邮件要点如下：问题：有缺页封面有污渍；要求：调换3．邮寄地址：因学校放假新地址为清江市东风街186号；电话18867626868。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】　irstly, some pages are missing. In addition, there are some dirty spots on the cover, which looks ugly.

　　I would like you to exchange a new one for me. Now that the winter holiday is around the

　　corner, I would appreciate it if you could post the new book as soon as possible according to the new address: No. 186 Dongfeng Street, Qingjiang City. I can be reached by 18867626868.

　　I'm looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　E(推荐信)

　　(2016·银川一中模拟)假如你是银川一中的李华你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Martin想来中国旅游你向他推荐了西安市请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.推荐理由：历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节以使内容充实、行文连贯；开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数。Dear Martin，

　　I'm very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】　student from Yinchuan No.1 Middle School, good at Chinese geography and history.When it comes to travelling in China, Xi'an is a popular tourist destination. First of all, Xi'an is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself.Second, people in Xi'an are friendly, kind, and willing to help others, which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant. Third, you can have a chance to experience different cultures and enjoy various delicious snacks in Xi'an.In addition，I'd like to serve as your guide if you come.

　　I do hope that you will have a good time in China.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　F(祝贺信)(2016·河南省八市重点高中质检)假如你是李华你的好友李明在中学生英语朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：向他表示祝贺； 请他介绍成功的经验；希望有一天能像他一样取得成功。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已为你写好但不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。【参考范文】　n first prize in the English Contest for middle school students, so I am writing to give congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.

　　As your best friend, I am proud of you! I know you always have been hard－working. Your efforts pay off at last. Your pronunciation and fluent English,

　　Your experience will be of great help to me in my learning.

　　I will appreciate it if you can write me back and give me your advice.

　　Looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　二、记叙文写作1．叙事类A

　　(2016·吉林省部分学校仿真考试)你校第二届教工冬季游泳比赛(the second teaching staff winter swimming competition)顺利举行。假如你是校英语报的记者请根据以下要点写一则报道。简述背景信息(时间、2．描述比赛场景及结果；发表你的评论。注意：1.词数100左右；以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

　　【参考范文】　l.

　　Teachers, all in high spirits, participated in the competition.Some were swimming as if they were specialists while others dived into the pool with water splashing around, making their students screaming and moving backwards. The swimming pool exploded into cheers and laughter, and people there seemingly forgot it was in winter. After the fierce competition, the team of the maths teachers got first place unexpectedly.What surprised us was that the team of our English teachers, who ranked the fifth last year, won second place.

　　This event is more than a competition, which provides our teachers with a platform where they can not only show their sports talents but free themselves from work for a while.

　　B

　　(2016·呼和浩特市质量普查调研考试)假定你是李华你的澳大利亚网友发来电子邮件询问最近你们学校举行的“中欧友好日暨中欧环保小使者走进欧盟学校”的活动情况。请给他回一封电子邮件介绍一下该活动。内容要点：1.中国学生表演了武术、书法、气功等具有中国特色的项目；欧洲学生表演了有关环保的节目；此次活动的意义。注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已为你写好不计入总词数)；可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。参考词汇：武术martial arts；气功Qigong－Europe Friendship Day,

　　【参考范文】　－Europe Friendship Day, ese students and their

　　European friends got gather at a EU's middle school.We Chinese students put on quite a few performances featuring Chinese cultures, including Chinese martial arts, handwriting, Qigong and so on, which turned out to be a big success. The performances given by the European students were more than attractive. They performed a moving play which was particularly focused on the environmental protection. Through the activity, students from China and Europe can better learn

　　from each other. It also contributes a better understanding of different cultures. Undoubtedly, we both can join hands to protect our earth. We believe that people coming from various countries with different backgrounds can surely appreciate each other and develop solid friendship.

　　Looking forwards to carrying out such activities with you.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　C

　　(2016·杭州市质检)人生充满着各种尝试无论成功与失败都是宝贵的财富。请以“A Failed Attempt”为题写一篇100～120词的短文叙述你生活中一次失败的尝试并谈谈你的感悟。

　　【参考范文】　A Failed Attempt

　　While in primary school, I once tried to run for president of the student government. Filled with eagerness and confidence, I burned the night oil and prepared an excellent election speech, which I was sure would touch my fellow students and won me the position. However, as it turned out, I lost the election. Later, my class tutor kindly pointed out that my speech and plan for the student government was too self－centered, to account. I spent a lot of

　　time reflecting on what she said and finally understood what she meant: We should always put ourselves in others' shoes. Yes, it was a failed attempt, but at the same time, it was also a successful one, because it taught me a very important lesson in life.

　　2．写人类(2016·玉溪一中模拟)假设你是李华是校英语俱乐部的成员。英语俱乐部下次交流的话题是My Hero请你写一篇英语发言稿介绍你班身残志坚的同学——王1.他不能正常地走路； 他对待生活和学习的态度；你敬佩他的原因。注意：1.词数100左右；可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

　　【参考范文】　hero with you, one of my classmates named Wang Yue.

　　When Wang Yue was born, he suffered from a rare disease, which made him unable to walk normally. As a result, he has to sit in a wheelchair all day. However, Wang Yue stays positive about life. He works hard at his lessons because he has a big dream. His ambition is to become a scientist when he grows up.

　　Wang Yue is my hero because he never gives up his dream although he has a physical disability.His example inspires us to try our best to make our dream come true.

　　That's all. Thank you.

　　三、说明文写作A

　　(2016·长春市十一高中仿真模拟)假设你是王平最近收到英国网友Tom的来信他在信中询问你对于1．选择专业要根据自己的兴趣、特长；参考别人的意见不要盲目报考热门专业；希望他能考入理想的大学。注意：1.词数：100左右；文章的开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数；可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

　　【参考范文】　uggestions：Firstlyeason that they have a better understanding of the majors.What's more, the so－called “hot majors” and “not－so－hot majors” are relative, mitted to your favorite university.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Wang Ping

　　B

　　(2016·山东师大附中三模)近1．列举不文明行为；2.指出其影响；3.提出建议。注意：1.词数100左右；可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；首句已给出不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】　ssing to see many Chinese tourists behaved badly abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights. Such bad behaviors overseas have caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.

　　Measures should be taken to stop this. First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.

　　四、议论文写作A

　　(2016·遵义航天高级中学模拟)随着电子商务的发展网络购物正日益成为China Daily的社会生活栏目版展开了关于网络购物的激烈讨论。请你写一封信谈谈网络购物的利弊以及你的看法。网络购物 1.方便快捷质优价廉 1.质量有时无法保证售后态度不好你的看法 ……注意：1.词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好不计入总词数。－commerce, young's life.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】　－commerce, ife.

　　That the online shopping becomes so popular with the young definitely has its own reasons. First and foremost, online shopping usually means something you buy both cheap in price and better in quality. Besides, goods you get online come to you，fast and convenient, saving your tiredness of shopping and walking. But the other side of the coin is also true.Goods bought online are not as fine as that from the store which you can watch, feel and smell by yourself. Some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods.

　　In my opinion, we should enhance our e－commerce.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　B

　　(2016·江西省重点中学联合模拟)近日教育部(the Ministry of Education)关于加强中小学劳动教育这一举措引发了人们的热议。请你根据下面表格中的内容写一篇短文给校报英文版投稿。学生的观点 一部分学生：劳动教育有助于身体健康全面发展。另一部分学生：劳动教育占用学习时间影响成绩。你的观点……

　　注意：1.词数100左右；可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

　　【参考范文】　nts should be given labor education while at school, which arouses a heated debate.

　　As for students, opinions are divided. Some students think that it will be of great benefit for their health, enabling them to be well developed.On the other hand, some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time, which will be spent studying otherwise. And it will have a negative effect on their grades.

　　It's true that students are given little chance of laboring nowadays, thus lacking the sense of labor. So as far as I'm concerned, students definitely should receive labor education so that they'll value more what labor brings about.