SAT作文批改实例(一)

　　SAT(Scholastic Assessment Test)是美国高中生进入美国大学需要参加的考试，也就是美国的高考。近年来，越来越多的准备去美国读本科的中国高中生开始参加SAT的考试。 SAT写作是整个SAT考试的第一部分，要求在25分钟内写完。很多高中生反映写不好SAT作文，得分很低。在接下来的几天里，我会将我评改的一些SAT 习作放到这里，供同学们学习和借鉴，希望对准备参加SAT考试的同学有一些帮助。

　　Topic: Teaching something to another person can help you to learn or master a subject or process?

　　Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below.

　　If you would thoroughly know anything, teach it to others. One who ceases to learn cannot adequately teach.- Tryon Edwards, Dictionary of Thoughts

　　Assignment: Do you think that teaching something to another person can help you to learn or master a subject or process? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experiences, or observations.

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　　Tryon Edwards took a firm stand, saying that if you would thoroughly know anything, teach it to others. One who ceases to learn cannot adequately teach. It means that teaching something to another people can help people learn a subject well. To me, I definitely believe it is true--- teaching can make the teacher master a process better---because I have experienced and read such things in my daily life.

　　Tryon Edwards took a firm stand, saying that if you would thoroughly know anything, teach it to others. One who ceases to learn cannot adequately teach. This means that teaching something to another person can help you to learn a subject well. To me, I definitely believe it is true---teaching can make the teacher master a process better--- because I have experienced and read such things in my daily life.