SAT作文批改实例(二)

　　Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below.

　　When I examine myself and my methods of thought, I come close to the conclusion that the gift of fantasy has meant more to me than my talent for absorbing positive knowledge.- Albert Einstein

　　There is nothing more dreadful than imagination without taste.- Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

　　Assignment: Do you believe that fantasy or imagination is more important than knowledge? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experiences, or observations.

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　　学生习作(第一段)

　　语言修改

　　Where did the knowledge come from? It comes from discoveries and inventions. So its not difficult to deduce that the original source of knowledge is fantasy or imagination that can accelerate the progress in both scientific and article fields. Theres no doubt that is theres no imagination or fantasy at all, knowledge will never exists. So its not difficult to get the answer that talent of creativity is more critical for us than the ability to absorb certain knowledge.

　　Where does knowledge come from? It comes from discoveries and inventions. So its not difficult to deduce that the original source of knowledge is fantasy or imagination that can accelerate the progress in both scientific and artistic fields. There is no doubt that without imagination or fantasy knowledge would never exist. Therefore, its not difficult to conclude that talent and creativity are more critical than the ability to absorb knowledge.