1.在观点上要具有洞察力,要有自己的原创特色。
观点是GRE作文考试的核心内容,考察考生能否对一个issue进行深入分析与思考并最终提出一个有层次的观点。有了原创观点就不用担心雷同。我这样说也许有有点像让快饿死的人去吃肉粥。如果真的要借鉴范文观点,我建议应该尽可能做一些调整,以避免第二个雷区。或者干脆在文中讲明这个思路是借鉴了哪一本参考书的。美国人对真小人比对伪君子要宽容。
2.绝对不能照抄原文。
在语言上可以使用一些范文的句式,但是绝对不能照抄原文,而是要换掉一些关键词。或者如果要借用关键词,则必须使用别的句式。
3.在结构上可以采取声东击西的策略。
比如把北美范文用在120题的结构和破题策略用在210题上。
4.可以引用范文例证。
在例证方面,使用范文用过的例证没有问题,哪怕用那些被判雷同的例证也没问题。例证是人类的共同知识,谁都可以使用,关键是我们不能用和范文作者同样的思路和语言来诠释例证并展开类似的论证。
因此,越是耳熟能详的例证如牛顿与苹果树、爱迪生孵蛋,要写出原创的内容就越困难,雷同的危险就越大。
新GRE写作素材题目:
Most people choose a career on the basis of such pragmatic considerations as the needs of the economy, the relative ease of finding a job, and the salary they can expect to make. Hardly anyone is free to choose a career based on his or her natural talents or interest in a particular kind of work.
新GRE写作范文正文:
Few people, if asked, would list his interests as the first element considered when searching for a career, yet even fewer would believe people would find a job just because it is out of that persons own interest, especially when it does not have anything to do with the popular trend. However, Id rather hold the opinion that these people do exist.
True indeed, it is just natural to base ones consideration on relative ease of finding a job and the salary of that job. Let me call it to follow the economic trends. Catering the needs of society is following the economic trend, to weigh the ease and difficulty of finding a job is following the economic trend, moreover, bargaining on the salary is also following the economic trend. It is human nature to follow a trend. There seems to be a hidden promise that by doing so, ones decision is probably to go right and wont lose much. Why not? When all people rush to choose a specific job, say, a lawyer or a dentist, it must have GREat profits in it. To wait and see means to lose opportunities. Even if the majority all lose, the mutual destiny comforts everyone. On the other hand,choosing an appropriate salary shows another side of following the trend. To earn and to compete makes up another part that urges people to find a so-called decent job.No wonder we see thousand of excellent middle-school students go to GREat lengths to distinguish themselves to enroll in law schools and business schools. They are following the trend! The economic trend tells them these schools will lead to a fine job.
However, I do believe there are individuals that make jobs out of their true love of something, disregarding any trends that other people run after. Weve got plenty of examples of such people. I may not be able to name some, but I know that such mavericks scatter on different corners on the earth. Others may argue that ignoring the needs of economy will just keep their products away from the markets and thus their income is possibly low. In response, Id tell them that the needs of economy is a relative concept. While most women follow the hair-style of letting it down, there are always a small population that holds to their own tastes of winding their hair up. In the similar way, the scare people who make products out of their own love will always have their scare but corresponding buyers.For them, find a job is not as easy as their counterparts mentioned above, but once they stick to their love and goal, they will make it!
In addition, not to follow the economic trend, to some extent, illustrates a new direction of all aspects of our economic process. Fashion cannot last long. Where they turn to a new point may well come from those people. In a sense, it is those individuals that are leading the trend, though in most cases they are unaware of it.
Last but not least, it is a GREat pleasure to base ones life on his or her natural talents or interest in a particular kind of work, no matter how much the salary is, no matter how people will react to it. This attitude releases them from the thousands anxieties that afflict other people. They may enjoy themselves so much when others are worrying about the inflation or the loss due to stock market. Those people aim to the true value of their products but not the day-to-day life. To them, working out of their true interests is more a part of his or her life, rather than a job to make a living on.
In short, it is all very well for people to follow the economic trends and to put many pragmatic considerations choosing a job. But the opposite group of people should never be regarded as poor guys that are not possibly to find a job. They will definitely sell while they enjoy their lives so much.
综上,要想根本避免GRE作文雷同情况发生,我们一方面可以在政策允许的范围内对范文进行合法、合理的使用,另一方面更要积极培养我们自己的独立思考能力,从根本上解决雷同问题,避免因雷同而被取消成绩。 这就需要考生有自己的思想、自己的例证和自己的语言,各位考生尽量不要照抄范文,而是自己来写。
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