GRE写作提纲举例指导（5）

　　7 、The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.

　　摄象机是非常重要的记录手段，但不能夸大其作用

　　1、承认摄象机可以生动而真实地记录发生事件 trip to Europe; Wedding ceremony; robbery in bank; stealing in supermarket; traffic rule violation

　　2、有些信息不适合仅用摄象机记录，特别是需要存档以后使用的信息，如复杂事件、会议 complex legal case; conference;

　　3、抽象信息摄象机无法记录，如数字信息，人的内心世界 quantitive information; peoples mind, thinking, feeling

　　 摄像机可以如此精确有力地记录当代人们的生活，因此它已经成为比纸笔记录更重要的记录方式。

　　1. 数码相机好。首先，后代可以更清楚地了解以前的事情. 此外，数码媒体占地更小 。这些对于文字来说都是不可能的

　　2. 文字媒体好

　　3. 最后，两者各有所长，还能取长补短：需要再现场景用照片;需要记录相关事实，挖掘内在含义，用文字;很多情况下，照片和文字结合使用，图文并茂才能完整的描述一件事情。

　　数码相机可以精确、令人信服地记录当代人们的生活，作为一种记录方式，它的重要性已经超过了纸笔记录。

　　关键词：摄影机，精准，记录，生活，代替纸笔

　　核心是：图象和文字记录的比较

　　1 分别定义图象记录 和文字记录

　　2 人类为什么要 记录 -创作+传播+记录史实

　　3 如何满足这样的需求?要求记录的工具必须-可以记录+可以传播+可以存储

　　4 从这三个基本要求出发，对图象记录和文字记录分别进行优劣比较

　　5 比较 1-可记录方面，VIDEO可以录声画，完全再现，缺点成本高，拍摄者的主观视角;文字，只有文字，理解时容易误差，然而最广泛的应用，所以各种流派各种思想都会被记录，比较全面客观

　　6 比较2-可传播方面。VIDEO要求要用放映的基本设施，文字作品轻便得多，随时随地可以看

　　7 比较3-可存储方面。拷贝的存储要求一些特定的要求，温度，湿度，等等;书籍就相对简单，而且复制起来也便宜

　　8 除此之外，VIDEO有一个致命的缺点，就是无法表达人内心的思想和一些抽象的东西。而文字是可以表达的。所以无法代替文字，但 100 年后如何，谁也不知道

　　【题目】The video camera provides such an accurate an d convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.

　　【提纲】数码相机可以精确地拍摄当代人们的生活，它的重要性已经超过了纸笔记录。

　　【翻译】Position ：balance ，两者配合使用

　　1. 摄像机优点：准确、生动、真实、能够记录瞬间、移动物体 ，而文字记录的阅读着还需要在脑中重现，并且由于记录者的原因可能产生误读。)

　　eg. Video surveillance cameras ar e objective witnesses with perfect memories, thus play a vital evidentiary role in legal proceedings, such as those involving robbery and motor vehicle violations

　　2. 摄像机缺点：记录时间短暂、成本高、不灵活- 携带不方便、无概括提炼

　　3、纸笔纪录的优点：经过思考、提炼、加工;随时记录;大众方式- 摄像机没普及

　　4、总结

　　Video 和Written Records

　　一、各有各的好处。录像机更形象，纸笔能记录抽象思维，而且录像机贵，不方便

　　二、录像机的好处 It is true that video records are more convincing and vibrant.

　　1.记录recount 大事件，卫星发射，新年音乐会，奥运会开幕式

　　2. 视觉效果 visual scene，文学作品最多只能 mental picture

　　3.生活中的瞬间, surprise party, baby born process, grad uate ceremony, clues for capturing droplets along our life river

　　三、录像机不能记录详 complex逻辑的clauses, 和statistical and quantitative 数据。as we know, video records are of little use in documenting complex, lo gical clauses and statistical, quantitative data.

　　1.法律条款，合同，条约

　　2.我体会 data的重要性 GDP，失业，CPI

　　四、录像机贵、不方便 the speaker ignores the obvious differences in costs and portability of video and written records.

　　1.不是每个人都买得起

　　2.不能随便带

　　3. On the basis of the scant resources, Net outcome 最大化, 恰当选择

　　7T The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of do cumentation than written records.

　　摄影机可以精确地拍摄当代

　　人们的生活，它的重要性已经超过了纸笔记录

　　Our life has gone through great changes since the video camera came into being, which provides a totally new and different way of recording life to the traditional written methods.

　　摄影机的优点：Compared with written records, video documentation is much less influenced by the one who took record and the one who interpreted it.

　　Another conspicuous advantage of video records is its生动lifelikeness 。People can see what happened by themselves.如：看 Olympic

　　摄影机的缺点：Yet its rash to say that video camera has already won over traditional written documents and become the new domination of do cumentation field since video record is limited in several aspects

　　A 过去的历史事件没有记录 restricted by time. B 价格高昂，不是所有人都能承受。

　　文字的优点：在统计数据方面，以及深刻性方面总结，各有千秋。有时需要结合起来。

　　We cannot say whether video camera or the written document is more important than the other in that each one has its irreplaceable merits and values. Video camera offers the accurate and convincing method of recording which can revive life in before while traditional written document can provide a more detailed and rational record in lower cost.