gre argument127提纲分析汇总

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　题目题材：管理

　　gre argument 127题目：

　　The vice president for human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the companys president.

　　In an effort to improve our employees productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. By installing software to detect employees Internet use on company computers, we can prevent employees from wasting time, foster a better work ethic at Climpson, and improve our overall profits.

　　提纲：

　　The vice president fails to provide any information about current performance and productivity of our employees, thus the assumption that their productivity should be and could be improved is open to doubt.

　　The vice president unfairly assumes that most of our employees use internet for personal or recreational activities.

　　The vice president ignores the necessity for some employees to use the Internet in their work.

　　Employees could still spend much time on personal or recreational activities even though the Internet access is banned.

　　The vice president overlooks the negative effects of the proposed activity on employees morale, thus the better work ethic mentioned above is not guaranteed.

　　The vice president fails to consider possible negative effects of installing such software on the performance of computers, and fails to provide the cost of installing the software.

　　Since Climpsons profits would be determined by many factors, adopting the proposal may not sufficiently ensure greater profits.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。