gre argument85提纲分析汇总

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　题目题材：政治经济

　　gre argument 85题目：

　　The following appeared in the letter to an editor of a Myrian newspaper.

　　Under Governor Winslows leadership over the past four years, Myria has enjoyed unprecedented prosperity. Average wage increases this year are higher than they have been at any time since the 1970s, the number of people who report being unemployed has decreased by 10 percent, and construction of new homes is up by one third. In contrast, over the past four years Governor Winslows opponent, Mr. Homer, has been mayor of a city in which only a small number of new businesses have opened. If Myrians want another four years like the past four years, they should reelect Governor Winslow.

　　提纲：

　　The author fails to prove that the prosperity of Myria resulted from Winslows leadership.

　　The author fails to inform us how much did average wage actually increase after adjustment for inflation.

　　Other cities might enjoy higher rate of wage increase, and lower rate of unemployment.

　　No evidence about the rate of wage increase, and decrease in unemployment rate before Winslows governing is provided.

　　The author unfairly equates the construction of new homes and opening of new businesses with the prosperity of a city.

　　The city under Mr. Homers leadership and Myria may not be comparable.

　　The author fails to provide information about the size and profitability of new businesses opened at the city governed by Homer.

　　The author unfairly assumes that Mr. Winslow will also perform excellent in the following years.

　　Many other factors would influence the development of a city, thus another four years prosperity is not guaranteed.

　　Other excellent candidates might also be available while ignored by the author.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。