gre argument114提纲分析汇总

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　题目题材：保健

　　gre argument 114题目：

　　A recently completed study shows that people dwelling in stairs-only apartment buildings live an average of three years longer than do people who live in buildings with both elevators and stairs. A second study shows that elderly residents of buildings with elevators make, on average, twice as many visits to doctors each year as do elderly residents of buildings without elevators. These findings suggest that even a very moderate amount of daily exercise, such as that required to use the stairs leading to and from ones apartment, can increase peoples health and longevity. The findings also suggest that new apartment buildings should be constructed with as few elevators as possible.

　　提纲：

　　The author fails to consider other possible differences between people who live in stairs-only apartments and people who live in buildings with elevators.

　　The author fails to consider the possibility that some people choose to live in the buildings with elevator because of their weak health and physique.

　　The fact that residents of buildings without elevator make fewer visits to doctors does not necessarily indicate that they are healthier than other people.

　　The author unfairly assumes that people who live in buildings with elevators will necessarily use elevators.

　　The author fails to consider the necessity of constructing sufficient elevators in new buildings, and the inconvenience with fewer elevators.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。