gre argument152提纲分析汇总

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　题目题材：城市

　　gre argument 152题目：

　　The following is a letter to the head of the tourism bureau on the island of Tria.

　　Erosion of beach sand along the shores of Tria Island is a serious threat to our island and our tourist industry. In order to stop the erosion, we should charge people for using the beaches. Although this solution may annoy a few tourists in the short term, it will reduce the number of people using the beaches and will raise money for replenishing the sand. Replenishing the sand, as was done to protect buildings on the nearby island of Batia, will help protect buildings along our shores, thereby reducing these buildings risk of additional damage from severe storms. And since the areas along the shore will be more attractive as a result, the beaches will be preserved and the areas tourist industry will improve over the long term.

　　提纲：

　　The author fails to illustrate the extent of erosion in Tria, thus we cannot evaluate if any measures are necessary to resolve the problem.

　　The author ignores other possible methods to stop the erosion.

　　The author fails to illustrate that charging people for using the beach could effectively stop the erosion.

　　The author fails to analyze how much money should we charge to raise enough money for replenishing the sand, and if the charge is feasible.

　　The author ignores some negative effects of the charging policy.

　　The author fails to demonstrate if the buildings alone our shores need to be protected.

　　The fact that replenishing beach sand has served to protect shoreline buildings on nearby Batia does not indicate that Tria would also achieve its goals by following Batias example.

　　The author unfairly assumes that replenishing sand would suffice to reduce the buildings risk of damage from severe storms.

　　The assumption that the proposed actions will necessarily make the seashore more attractive is open to doubt.

　　Adopting the actions proposed by the author might not sufficiently improve Trias tourist in the long term.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。