Last November 24 was my birthday. I had a party at my home. My friends came to my home in the afternoon and I got a lot of presents from them. At the party, we ate a big cake, sang songs, watched TV and listened to music. We were very happy. But all good things must come to an end. We said goodbye at about ten oclock. We had a very good time on November 24.
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去年十一月二十四日是我的生日。我在家有一个派对。下午我的朋友们来我家，我收到了很多礼物。聚会上，我们吃了一个大蛋糕，唱了歌，看了电视，听了音乐。我们很高兴。但是所有美好的事情还是要结束。我们在大约十点时说再见。十一月二十四日是美好的一天。