题目:
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用校刊英语园地写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程。
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.
注意:
1. 词数不少于 60.
2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
考点:考察看图作文
写作指导:
本文属于看图作文。叙述的是李华和同学们向学校建议解决自行车存放的问题。属于记叙文,使用第一人称和一般过去时。
要点:
1.在自行车存放处前面,我看见很多人都拥挤在一起;
2.找到几个同学一起讨论具体解决方法。
3.找到校长提出建议;
4.校方采纳建议,多开了一个进出的门。
看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字,再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来,除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外,考生还需要根据词数要求,适当拓展并发挥想象,从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材,考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素。
【一句多译】
在我们学校自行车存放处有一个长久以来就存在的问题。
(1)There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school
(2)The parking place for bikes was an existing problem for a long time in our school。
【参考范文】
One possible version
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.
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