Thank you for your offer invite me to the free 1. __________
summer English course in your school. As for my 2. __________
choice of the two courses， Id prefer the five-weeks 3. __________
course for 50 hours. This would allows me more 4. __________
time to see your beautiful country while learned 5. __________
language. Id like to do some traveling and make 6. __________
a few new friends. In all the subjects Im learning 7. __________
at school， I like English best. I hope me to take this 8. __________
chance to improve my spoken English level as much 9. __________
as possibly. I believe I will have a wonderful time 10. _________
in England this summer.
【答案解析】
1. 把invite改为inviting。现在分词作定语修饰offer。
2. 此行正确。
3. 把five-weeks改为five-week。数词+连字符号+名词作定语，其中的名词要用单数。
4. 把allows改为allow。在助动词will， would及情态动词can， may， must等后面，永远要用动词原形。
5. 把learned改为learning。while learning=while Im learning。
6. 在language前加the。特指英语这种语言。
7. 把In改为Of。subjects科目，English是其中一个科目，表示最高级的比较范围，若是整体与个别的关系，就用of。指时间、地点范围，才用in。
8. 去掉me。主语希望自己做某事，直接用hope to do sth，事实上，也不能用hope sb to do sth这一句型。
9. 去掉level。这是中文式英语。improve=makebetter。
10. 把possibly改为possible。asas possible(尽)是习语。