The Sunshine Sports program is warmly welcomed in our school. Nearly all the students have taken part in it. Most students are interested in playing sports. They think they have lots of fun. Many students are happy with skipping rope. They believe it really keeps them healthy. A few students are relaxed while taking a walk. They find it good to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom. However, a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.
No matter what students think about the program,all the students like the idea which is to make them happy and keep them fit at the same time.
点评:本文最大的优点在于,作者在传达不同的学生为什么选择不同的运动的时,所使用的表达方式,比如They think,They believe,They find it good等,避免了重复,展现了语言的多样化。 这并不是每个同学都能做到的,很多同学在表达观点时很容易犯重复的毛病,通通使用I think,这样使文章看起来很乏味,因此,本文作者丰富的表达方式有很大的借鉴意义。
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