昨天，我和我的朋友们一起去我们家乡最大的公园金山公园游玩。我们一进公园，就被那么多盛开的鲜花惊呆了。我们沿着小河散步，享受着那迷人的景色。鱼儿在水里自由地游着。最有趣的事情莫过于爬金山了。山并不太高，但很难爬。我们爬了二十分钟才到达山顶。我们从山顶往下看，多么漂亮的城市风光啊!高楼大厦，鳞次栉比，汽车在宽阔的马路上行驶，长江水滚滚东流去，白云朵朵飘浮在我们头顶。真是快乐的一天呀!
Yesterday my friends and I went to Golden Hill, the biggest park in our hometown. When we entered the park, we were surprised to see so many flowers. They all fully blo omed. We walked along the riverside,enjoying the charming view. Fishes in the water were swimming freely.
The most interesting thing was to climb the Golden Hill. It was not too high, but it was difficult to climb. We mounted it after twenty minutes. We looked at the city from the top of the hill. What a beautiful city it was!There stood countle tall buildings. Many cars were ru ing along wide treets. The Yangtze River was pouring to the east. White clouds were just above our heads. We really had a good time that day.