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My name is Bonnie.Im F. 1(全称) student.Im short and slim.Im wear(wear注意时态) glasses but it isnt(doesnt) represent that Im a good student.My hair is long and straight.I always tie it in(with) a ponytail.
My favorite subject are(subjects,注意主谓一致) mathematics and V.A. and I just dislike English because of(because+句子,because of+名词或名词短语) I am bad in(at,注意固定搭配) it.Im neither a bad student nor a good student.I was(am,注意时态) always day-dreaming when my English teacher asked(asks) me questions.So,she is not going to call my name again.My mum had(has) been verydisappointed about this.Therefore,im trying to improve my english.
I have a lots of hobbies such as collecting stamp(stamps),ice-skating and watching animations.Im crazy aboutanimations,especially hot-bloodinganimations.(Vow!~~~~)I spend a lots of time on it.I always dream that i will be aanimationist.I alway try to draw some comic strips.
批改老师:张淑娟
张淑娟(查看张淑娟老师介绍), 在教学中,张老师静则一丝不苟、严肃认真、有条不紊地向学生灌输完备的知识体系,动则激情四溢,用夸张和幽默的动作或语言形式向学生展示英语的魅力和英语 学习的趣味。总之张老师以调动学生对英语学习的积极性为基础,用心培养学生对英语的兴趣,因材施教地开发学生的 智 的同时也注重对学生的 德、体、美、劳的教育。
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