My good friend

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I have a lot of good friends,but the best is Li Te.

Li Te is alovely boy . He studies in Yi He school. He and I are in the same class. He is 12 years old.Although he is older than me, but he is short and thin. He is not good atlearning ,but he studies hard. I believe his results would will be very good.

He lives in Linyi. His home isnot far from school,so he goes to school by bike,sometimes he goes on foot.

Like me, he has a lot of hobbies, such as reading ,collecting stamps ,playing computer games and so on. Onweekends, we often play together, and doing do our homework, watching TV and visiting other friends.We had so much fun together.

I will treasure our friendship .Ill be hisgood friend forever.

六年级 张笑尘

点评：Nice！六年级的学生能写出这么流畅的作文很不容易。对于同学既有细节描写又有感情抒发，用词相当准确，逻辑也很清晰，只有少数语法错误，希望继续努力。

Jack 张

批改老师：Jack 张

Jack张，（查看Jack张老师介绍 课堂实拍），老师人称杰克船长（Captain Jack），毕业于北京大学，有独特的英语学习方法和备考参考技巧。张老师上课非常有激情，善于调动课堂的气氛和学生的积极性，有极强的责任感。所教导的学生无不成绩大幅提高，并真正爱上了英语学习。