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I got a penpal online.Her name is Tina .She is 16 years old.She is from Australia.She is outgoing.She likes travelling.She has been to China and visited the Great Wall.She thinks China is great.
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I got a penpal online named Tina, a girl of 16 years old. As an outgoing student from Australia, Tina is fond of travelling and has been to China and visited the Great Wall. She thinks China is really great.
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吴孝刚，（查看吴孝刚老师介绍 课堂实拍） 英语专业硕士研究生，上课幽默风趣，课下认真负责。深受学员喜爱和家长的赞赏。从事英语教育事业五年。曾担任过大学教师、中小学教师、剑少辅导老师和三一 口语培训师。指导过公三，大学英语四级和英语专业四级培训。现在主要负责初中和中考英语课程，是学而思一线金牌教师。擅长与学生为友，同孩子交流，迅速找 到问题并解决。
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