有的考生们还有另外一个盲区,一味的以为只要写出长句子来就是好作文。拿雅思大作文来说,最少250个字,若能都写长句子,如此一来,的确10来句话就可以搞定一篇大作文,看似相当轻松。然而事实上长句子并非是一篇好文章的唯一衡量,而且就算可以,复杂长句对大多数考生来说却是很难攻克的难关。许多考生一看到长句子就头痛,再夹杂着根深蒂固的中式化思维,就开始胡乱翻写,老师上课分析过的从句,伴随等写法完全被抛在脑后。
正是由于以上这些现象,考生们在平时备考的练习中更要把作放在第一位,真正领会长句子的写法。本文将试从角色定位来分析如何做到有效的复杂长句多样化的表达。
一、角色定位介绍
其实角色定位就是感情的表达,真正在写作中融入感情的体现。在角色定位中,复杂的长句中的成分不再死气沉沉而是一个个演员,活灵活现地出现在我们面前,上演着一出出多样的好戏。
所谓的角色定位就是专门针对一句话中出现多个主语,动词等的复杂长句的分析方法。我们将谓语动词和主语分别定位为男女主角,而剩余的可根据句型定位为一二三配角。确立好主次关系之后就可按序写作,防止毫无头绪不分先后的胡乱写法,以更好地帮助完成独立的创作和感情的写作。
二、角色定位实例
我们现在以雅思写作中关于part-time job的一句话为例,利用角色定位来试分析。
如:兼职工作会使他们过早接触一些社会丑陋的现象,因为学生们正处在成型期,无法辨明是非,所以很容易会被误入歧途。
许多同学一看到这句话就犯晕,只觉错综复杂,然而对以上这句话稍作分析,我们不难发现以下特点:
1,2个名词:兼职工作学生们
2,4个动词:使..。接触,处于,辨明误入歧途
下面我们利用角色定位,通过图例更清晰地理清他们之间的关系
图例
1,将本句中兼职工作定位为女主角即主角名词,使接触定位为男主角即主角动词,将会出现在长句子的主句中,其他为配角,再配合进从句等各种表达,那么本句就可以写成:
Part-time job makes students get in touch with certain ugly phenomenon in the society earlier,because they are in shaping period and can not distinguish the right from the wrong clearly, which may make them go astray easily。
2,将本句中学生们定位为女主角,辨明定位为男主角,其他为配角,那么本句可以写成:
Students can not tell the right from the wrong clearly due to their staying at shaping period, so the part-time job, which may get them in touch with certain ugly phenomenon in the society earlier, might easily make them go astray。
3,将本句中学生们定位为女主角,处于定位为男主角,其他为配角,那么本句可以写成:
Lacking of the ability to distinguish the right and wrong, students are in the period of shaping; as a result they may easily go astray if they take part in part-time job which may make them contact some ugly phenomenon in the society。
4,将本句中学生们定位为女主角,误入歧途定位为男主角,其他为配角,那么本句还可以写成:
Students may easily go astray when they have part-time jobs which may let then face some ugly phenomenon in the society earlier, because of the shaping period in which they lack the ability to tell right and wrong clearly。
通过分析,我们不难发现,在写复杂长句子时只要先定位好各个成分,那么就相对来说可以轻松写出多样化的句子。当然角色定位法只是帮助大家更好地分析长句子,不至于混乱,要想写好多样化的长句子还必须要靠大家平时在学习中扎实基础,两者相结合才能写出更美的句子。
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