句子、词语。文章由句子组成,句子由词语组成。在着手写文章之前,应该提醒自己注意下面几点
指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句:
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
读完上面这一句话,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为:
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例
常见联词
表层进
first, firstly to begin with/second, secondly to start with/third, thirdly whats more/also and then/and equally important/besides in addition/further in the first place/still furthermore/last but not the least/next besides/too moreover/finally
表举例
for example for instance/to illustrate as an illustration/after all/
表解释
as a matter of fact/frankly speaking/in this case namely/in other words
表总结
in summary in a word/in brief in conclusion/to conclude in fact/indeed in short/in other words /of course/it is true specially/namely in all/that is to summarize/thus as has been said/altogether in other words/finally in simpler terms/in particular that is/on the whole to put it differently/therefore
表强调
of course indeed/above all most important/emphasis certainly in fact
表让步
still nevertheless/in spite of all the same/even so after all/concession granted naturally/of course
表比较
in comparison likewise/similarly equally/however likewise/in the same way/
表转折
by contrast although/e same time but/in contrast nevertheless/notwithstanding on the contraryon the other hand otherwise/regardless still/though yet/despite the fact that even so/even though for all that/however in spite of/instead
表时间
after a while afterward/again also/and then as long as/at last at length/at that time before/besides earlier/eventually finally/formerly further/furthermore in addition/in the first place in the past/last lately/meanwhile moreover/next now/presently second/shortly simultaneously/since so far/soon still/subsequently then/thereafter too/until until now/when
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