问:请问老师,在雅思写作的时候如果我提出一些比较新的观点,这样会不会让考官觉得印象会打折扣。我该如何训练写作的连贯性呢?
老师:
首先第一点如果考生在写雅思作文的时候观点比较新颖,那是会得到鼓励的,雅思的考官鼓励创意,你如果有新颖,或者跟别人不一样考官更感兴趣,更容易拿高分。但是还有一点不要忘了,光有观点新颖,缺乏逻辑性,那是不行的。你新颖的观点能够自圆其说,有没有例子,有没有逻辑的依据,写的时候上下文是否连贯,用词怎么样同等作用。连贯,雅思考卷自己承认,这是最难把握的,考官要想注重连贯可以分两个层面,简单一点,说话的时候写作的时候,一步一步来就行了,第一点我要说什么,接下来那点我说什么,第三点我说什么,一点一点基本连贯性。有的时候连贯性因果关系、对比关系,有的人可能这样说,但是我不这么想,我这么想的原因是什么,这些都体现一定程度上的关系。换句话说,说话有板有眼,逻辑性,一步一步来。
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