首段:
第一句: 描述背景 it is indisputable fact that
替换句型: it is an undeniable fact that
it is an irrefutable fact that
第二句: the serious consequences of are often felt in our life .
第三句:承上启下:In this essay , I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solution to it .
替换句型: In the following essay , I aim to identify the sources of this problem as well as some viable solution to it .
第二段: 分析原因
第一句: Chief among the causes of this problem is .
替换句型:
第二句: In the past ,
第三句: Consequently ,
第四句: Another major contributing factor is that
第三段:提供解决方案
第一句: In order to address its root causes. Perhaps the most effective method of doing this
would be for people to do sth.
第二句: Since ,
第三句: one further measure would be to
替换句型: one further method of would be for people to do
第四段: 总结
第一句: In conclusion , I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term .
替换句型: In reality , this problem is unlikely to be resolved in the short term.
第二句: However , I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step .
However , it is by no means insurmountable , and I am convinced that
替换句型: however , I believe that the hard way is sometimes that the best way .
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