首先给大家一个例子来分析一下,词句对雅思写作文章意思的理解产生量多大的影响。
A prevalent attitude amongst many nurses was that there was no reward or recognition for not utilizing the paid sick leave entitlement allowed them in their employment conditions。
在大多数中国考生手中,想要表达同一个意思的时候,prevalent90%都会变成popular,; reward or recognition 也十有八九变成了benefits;a prevalent attitude amongstwas that,几乎全部变成了many nurses think that。
所以这也就是大家雅思写作分数越来越低的根本原因。大家的遣词造句的能力实在不高,英语词汇太过千篇一律。
另外一个例子更有代表性,当你想表达想的时候,你会怎么写,think几乎会立即出现在你的脑中。但是像agree,recommend,claim等等被细化了的单词就被大家遗忘在角落里了,所以大家的雅思写作重点还是要放在遣词造句上。
另外一个例子:
Similar attitudes have been noted by James, who noted that sick leave is seen by many workers as a right, like annual holiday leave。
根据这个例子,有考生写为:
James also found that many workers thought that sick leave was their rights, like annual holiday leave。
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