IELTS Writing Band Descriptors: Task 1
Band
Task achievement
Coherence and cohesion
Lexical resource
Grammatical range and accuracy
9
fully satisfies all the requirements of the task
clearly presents a fully developed response
uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention
skilfully manages paragraphing
uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as slips
uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as slips
8
covers all requirements of the task sufficiently
presents, highlights and illustrates key features/ bullet points clearly and appropriately
sequences information and ideas logically
manages all aspects of cohesion well
uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately
uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings
skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation
produces rare errors in spelling and/or word formation
uses a wide range of structures
the majority of sentences are error-free
makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies
7
covers the requirements of the task
presents a clear overview of main trends, differences or stages
presents a clear purpose, with the tone consistent and appropriate
clearly presents and highlights key features/bullet points but could be more fully extended
logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout
uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use
uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation
may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation
uses a variety of complex structures
produces frequent error-free sentences
has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors
6
addresses the requirements of the task
presents an overview with information appropriately selected
presents a purpose that is generally clear; there may be inconsistencies in tone
presents and adequately highlights key features/ bullet points but details may be irrelevant, inappropriate or inaccurate
arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression
uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical
may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task
attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy
makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication
uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms
makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication
5
generally addresses the task; the format may be inappropriate in places
recounts detail mechanically with no clear overview; there may be no data to support the description
may present a purpose for the letter that is unclear at times; the tone may be variable and sometimes inappropriate
presents, but inadequately covers, key features/ bullet points; there may be a tendency to focus on details
presents information with some organisation but there may be a lack of overall progression
makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesive devices
may be repetitive because of lack of referencing and substitution
uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task
may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader
uses only a limited range of structures
attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences
may make frequent grammatical errors and punctuation may be faulty; errors can cause some difficulty for the reader
4
attempts to address the task but does not cover all key features/bullet points; the format may be inappropriate
fails to clearly explain the purpose of the letter; the tone may be inappropriate
may confuse key features/bullet points with detail; parts may be unclear, irrelevant, repetitive or inaccurate
presents information and ideas but these are not arranged coherently and there is no clear progression in the response
uses some basic cohesive devices but these may be inaccurate or repetitive
uses only basic vocabulary which may be used repetitively or which may be inappropriate for the task
has limited control of word formation and/or spelling; errors may cause strain for the reader
uses only a very limited range of structures with only rare use of subordinate clauses
some structures are accurate but errors predominate, and punctuation is often faulty
3
fails to address the task, which may have been completely misunderstood
presents limited ideas which may be largely irrelevant/repetitive
does not organise ideas logically
may use a very limited range of cohesive devices, and those used may not indicate a logical relationship between ideas
uses only a very limited range of words and expressions with very limited control of word formation and/or spelling
errors may severely distort the message
attempts sentence forms but errors in grammar and punctuation predominate and distort the meaning
2
answer is barely related to the task
has very little control of organisational features
uses an extremely limited range of vocabulary; essentially no control of word formation and/or spelling
cannot use sentence forms except in memorised phrases
1
answer is completely unrelated to the task
fails to communicate any message
can only use a few isolated words
cannot use sentence forms at all
0
does not attend
does not attempt the task in any way
writes a totally memorised response
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