2012年2月4日雅思写作真题
Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, while others believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
2012年2月4日雅思写作真题独家解析
步骤一:破题
1. Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society. Do you agree or disagree? --- Agree
2. While others believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Do you agree or disagree? --- Agree
步骤二:提纲
Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society. Do you agree or disagree?
Agree:
generation gap ---- communication
characteristic of a nation ---- diversity --c-- loss of cultural heritage
While others believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Do you agree or disagree?
Agree:
rather restricted---- less innovative--c--creative
步骤三:语言
Introduction
Some socialists are based on the idea that the youth should be required to behave in accordance with their social traditions whereas others hold that youngsters should be allowed to behave freely as they wish to. This essay will evaluate both of these viewpoints.
Body
There is no doubt that it is significant for the youth to follow their social traditions. Initially, it is of substantial importance to regulate their behavior and thus smooth the communication between the young and their parents, so that the generation gap, which frequently occurs in a wide range of families, would be less likely generated. Subsequently, it is a commonly shared convention that social traditions are considered as the characteristics of a nation. The heritage of those characteristics would largely ensure a countrys cultural diversity. However, if young people do not follow their social traditions, the integrity of their culture will suffer from a considerable loss.
However, although it seems to be beneficial for the youth to behave within the confines of their social traditions, we should not neglect the blessings to which allowing them to behave freely will contribute. They tend to be rather restricted because of the pressure stemmed from the tradition of their community and consequently there is a higher possibility for them to become less creative in areas, where innovation is highly demanded, including advertising industry. By contrast, if they are allowed to behave as they wish to, young people are more likely to become innovative. As a result of this, they may fully stretch their potential, thereby contributing as much as they could to the fields they are specialized in.
Conclusion
In conclusion, young people need the traditions of their community to regulate their own behavior and following them may significantly help in achieving this. However, the youth being allowed to behave freely is equally important in terms of creating an innovative generation.
步骤四:检查
1. 句子结构是否丰富多变,动词时态、主谓一致等
2. 用词精确、替换同义词、拼写
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