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雅思写作优秀范文欣赏（6）

发布时间：2016-02-29 编辑：查字典英语网小编

　　为了方便广大考生更好的复习，综合整理了2011年雅思写作优秀范文欣赏，以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生复习有所帮助。愿大家都能取得好成绩，

　　Topic

　　Every year large numbers of people migrate from one country to another for different reasons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of migration for the individual and for society as a whole.

　　Rewritten Sample Writing

　　Reasons for people migrating from one country to another are manifold and range from personal interests， such as fulfilling ones childhood dream to business related issues such as work relocation.

　　It is undeniable that new immigrants have the privilege to try a new and different lifestyle that has the potential to deviate remarkably from their origin， and this unique experience has attracted a great number of participants.

　　Apart from this， all immigrants have also brought their individual culture to the new land， which enhances the cultural diversity of the nation. Furthermore， all migrants not only take their skills， but also their fortune with them and as a result， a large amount of money has been invested into the destination country. For example， a large portion of infrastructure funding in Japan is from their migrants investment.

　　However， for individuals， adapting to a new community that maybe has conflicting customs， is a challenging task.

　　Some new immigrants may feel depressed， especially during the initial years. Meanwhile， in terms of the society as a whole， new arrivals from outside of the country will increase the severity of employment competition， as the number of job seekers rises significantly， while job opportunities remain the same.

　　In conclusion， migrating to another new country is an important decision and one is required to consider all of the pros and cons into consideration before making such a decision.

　　雅思写作是中国考生的弱项，只有在日常生活中多读些范文，了解雅思写作中的逻辑思维，才可更好的进行锻炼。考生们可在日常生活中多读范文，多练笔，培养出好的语感和逻辑，这样才能在考试中写出优秀的作文。

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