我叫林鸿昕，今年8岁半，在广东省深圳市宝安区锦华实验学校三（4）班读书。我个子不算高，也不算矮，有点胖，长着一双明亮的眼睛，特别有神。
My name is Lin Hongxin. I am 8 and a half years old. I study in class 4, Jinhua experimental school, Bao'an District, Shenzhen City, Guangdong Province. I'm not tall, I'm not short. I'm a little fat. I have bright eyes. I'm very smart.
我擅长英语和语文，我还喜欢看故事书，特别是好看的故事，我都会看的。
I am good at English and Chinese. I also like reading story books, especially good-looking stories, which I can read.
我的优点是很快在学校就完成作业，而且完成得很好。
My advantage is that I can finish my homework in school very quickly and well.
我的缺点是考试很马虎，做完不检查。在“马虎”伴随我的日子里，我深受其害，因为它，我失去了很多得一百分的机会，丢三落四，还闹出了不少笑话。就拿英语期末考来说吧，本来英语有可能上100份，可是我粗心大意，把中心（centre）写成center了。
My disadvantage is that I'm careless in the exam and don't check after it. In the days when "sloppy" accompanied me, I suffered a lot because of it, I lost a lot of chances to get a hundred points, lost a lot of things, and made a lot of jokes. Take the English final exam for example. There might have been 100 copies of English, but I carelessly wrote the center as the center.
我现在正在努力改正这些问题，你会和我交朋友吗？
I'm trying to correct these problems now. Will you make friends with me?