我是一个大大咧咧的女孩子，今年8岁。性格开朗、爱好运动、喜欢交朋友、生活自理能力强等都是我的优点。但我还有两个急需改正的缺点。
I'm a careless girl. I'm 8 years old. Cheerful personality, like sports, like to make friends, self-care ability is strong and so on. But I have two shortcomings that need to be corrected.
我最大的缺点是喜欢哭，让别人误以为我很娇气。其实，我并不是这样。从二年级开始，我就自己上、下学，早餐也是自己解决呢！暑假中，我还能独立完成洗衣洗碗、扫地拖地等家务活。但是我爱哭的毛病一直都没有什么改变。为了改正这个缺点，妈妈把我送进了绘画班，希望我从那五颜六色的画中发现生活的美。通过一段时间的学习，我认为自己确实有些进步了。现在呀，当我遇到不顺心或不高兴的事儿，我就会想起那美丽的山水画，这样我就不像以前那样爱哭啦！
My biggest drawback is that I like to cry and make others think I'm delicate. Actually, I'm not. Since the second grade, I have been going to and from school by myself. Breakfast is also my own solution! During the summer vacation, I can also do the housework such as washing dishes and sweeping the floor. But my crying habit hasn't changed much. In order to correct this defect, my mother sent me to the painting class, hoping that I found the beauty of life from the colorful paintings. After a period of study, I think I have made some progress. Now, when I encounter something unpleasant or unhappy, I will think of the beautiful landscape painting, so that I don't like to cry like before!
我还有个缺点是性子急躁，生活中的我遇到什么难题或困难，我就会急得直跳急嚷：“妈妈，快来、快来……”事后，妈妈总是告诫我，做事要认真仔细、心平气和才能解决问题。为此，我参加了毛笔书画班来培养自己的耐心和静心，学习毛笔书法需要安静的环境。不知不觉中，我感觉到我那急躁的性子有了很大的改观。
I also have a shortcoming that I am impatient. If I encounter any problems or difficulties in my life, I will jump up and shout: "Mom, come quickly..." After the event, my mother always told me to work carefully and calmly to solve the problem. For this reason, I took part in a brush calligraphy and painting class to cultivate my patience and meditation. Learning brush calligraphy requires a quiet environment. Unconsciously, I felt that my impatience had changed a lot.
总而言之，我是一个爱哭爱闹的女孩。我幻想通过自己的不断努力，把自己整形为人见人爱的乖女孩！
All in all, I am a crying girl. I fantasize that through my continuous efforts, I will shape myself into a lovely girl!