一天我到金鱼缸旁边丢了一块面包到金鱼缸里。刚才还文文静静的鱼儿一下子都争先恐后地游了过来，接着就是一场激烈地争夺战。最后，还是那条肚子最大的“乌龙眼”把大家争夺了半天的面包一口吞进了嘴里。
One day I went to the goldfish bowl and lost a piece of bread to it. Just now, the fish, who were still quiet, all rushed to swim here. Then there was a fierce battle. Finally, it was the biggest "wulongyan" in the stomach that swallowed the bread that everyone had been fighting for for for for half a day.
(给爷爷养的金鱼喂食后写的，生动精彩，还会使用好词，对只有七岁的廖ê怖此岛懿蝗菀住BR> 海王星所有的作文我们都存在他的qq空间，全是他本人所作，有空老师可看看！刚才我试着将这篇文章粘贴到百度中搜索，只有他空间发的一篇符合，我也想知道儿子以前是否是借鉴别人的，结果不是，验证下，因为写的太棒了！哪有作父母对儿女的成长不暗自欢喜的，还请陈老师理解。谢谢您辛勤地工作，让孩子爱上写作文，让父母、老师更欣慰！)
(it's written after feeding grandpa's goldfish. It's vivid and wonderful. It can also use good words. We have QQ space for all compositions written by Neptune, who is only seven years old. It's all written by himself. You can have a look at it if you have time! Just now, I tried to paste this article into Baidu search. Only one of the articles he sent was consistent. I also want to know if my son used to learn from others. The result is not. Verify it, because it's great! Which parents are not secretly happy with their children's growth? Please understand Mr. Chen. Thank you for your hard work, let your children fall in love with writing, let parents, teachers more gratified! )