“有句话常挂嘴边”,初看平淡无奇,细品意味悠长。题目贴近考生实际,意在启发考生观察生活、体验生活并思考生活,具有很大的思考和想象空间,每个考生都应该有话可说。考生可以在作文中充分畅谈感受,张扬个性,抒写情思,展示才华。
"There's a saying that's often talked about." at first, it's plain, and the details mean a long time. The topic is close to the examinee's reality and aims to inspire the examinee to observe, experience and think about life. It has a great space for thinking and imagination. Every examinee should have something to say. Candidates can fully talk about their feelings, publicize their personalities, express their feelings and show their talents in their compositions.
这个题目是一个主谓短语,对这个短语中的每一个词语的内容都要弄清楚。首先要明白本题目写作的对象,即是谁“有句话常挂嘴边”。从题目来看,这个“谁”既可以是自己,也可以是他人,如父母、老师、同学、成功人士,也可以是某一类人,甚至是自己的偶像等等。其次,要明确,这句话的内容是什么,为什么要常挂在嘴边?会产生什么样的作用?这应该是作文的主要内容。从考生本人的角度,可以选写如妈妈或老师期望和激励自己的话,也可以选写如某一句格言或座右铭之类的话,都很有意义。当然也可以写他人的话,如写自己印象中的某个成功人士,反映出其精神面貌的常挂在嘴边的一句话。也可以选写一些不良的口头语,对此加以批评,对社会风气提点建议,等等。不过,不管你选择谁来写,写他(她)的哪一句“常挂嘴边”的话,都要有真情实感,绝不可胡编乱造。
This topic is a subject predicate phrase, and the content of every word in this phrase should be clear. First of all, we should understand the writing object of this topic, that is, who "has a sentence to talk about.". From the point of view of the topic, this "who" can be not only oneself, but also others, such as parents, teachers, classmates, successful people, some kind of people, even their own idols and so on. Secondly, we should be clear about what the content of this sentence is and why it is often said? What kind of effect will it have? This should be the main content of the composition. From the perspective of the examinee himself, it is meaningful to choose to write such words as what his mother or teacher expects and inspires him, or to choose to write such words as a maxim or motto. Of course, you can also write other people's words, such as a successful person in your own impression, a sentence often on your lips that reflects his mental outlook. You can also choose to write some bad oral words, criticize them, and give some suggestions on social ethos, etc. However, no matter who you choose to write it or what sentence "often talked about" written by him or her, you should have a real feeling and never make it up.
从文体选择来看,本题目写记叙文、议论文、散文,甚至小小说,都无不可,但考生应用最拿手的文体去写作。如写议论文,可以这样构思:第一分论点——毅力顽强者常把“天下无难事”挂在嘴边;第二分论点——嘴边的“天下无难事”,帮助毅力顽强者走向成功;中心总论点——把“天下无难事”挂在嘴边,是成功者的标志!如写记叙文,可以这样构思:我的父母有一句口头禅,常挂在嘴边,那就是“黄金棍儿出好人”;每当我犯错挨“修理”时,这句话总要从父母嘴里冒出来;每当看到有关学生教育出问题的资讯时,父母也总要唠叨这句话;有一次,……现在,我终于明白了这句话的含义。
From the perspective of stylistic choice, this topic can be used to write narratives, argumentative papers, essays, and even small novels, but candidates should use the most skilled style to write. For example, when writing argumentative papers, we can conceive the following ideas: the first point is that persistent people often talk about "nothing is difficult in the world"; the second point is that "nothing is difficult in the world" helps persistent people to succeed; the central general point is that "nothing is difficult in the world" is a sign of success! If I write a narrative, I can think of it as follows: my parents have a saying that they often say, "gold sticks are good people"; when I make mistakes and get "fixed", it always comes out of my parents' mouths; when I see the news about students' education problems, my parents always nag this sentence; once Now, I finally understand the meaning of this sentence.
要写好本作文,写作构思时,还要注意以下问题:
To write a good composition, when writing ideas, we should pay attention to the following issues:
1.要突出一句话,而且这句话是常常挂在嘴边的。那么,偶尔提提,不轻易谈起的话,就不能写。在套用自己以往相关的作文时就要特别注意这一点。
1. Highlight a sentence, which is often on the lips. Then, if you mention it occasionally and don't talk about it easily, you can't write it. We should pay special attention to this point when applying our previous relevant compositions.
2.由于比较容易写,所以,往往会写得平庸,考生要特别注意。
2. Because it is easy to write, it is often written in a mediocre way. Candidates should pay special attention to it.