闲庭信步，一览无遗的月光直泻而下。这让我与归有光颇有同感，看那庭阶寂寂，风移影动的景色，与项脊轩无异。树木本是肩并肩密密地挨着，而此时，树影斑驳间的那点空白却泻下点点清光，尤为别致。这使我想起了有关空白的种种物象。也许“满载一船星辉”的充实值得羡慕，而我觉得留点空白亦会有别致的情调。
Strolling in the courtyard, the moonlight at a glance pours down. This makes me feel the same as GUI Youguang. The view of the quiet court steps and the wind moving shadows is the same as Xiang Jixuan. The trees are close to each other side by side, but at this time, the gap between the mottled shadows is a little light, especially unique. This reminds me of all kinds of things about the blank. Perhaps the enrichment of "full load of starlight" is enviable, and I think it will be unique to leave some blank.
“宝玉，你好……”黛玉在红消香断的尽头拼尽全劲的话让人们猜之思之。如若直接喊出“你好狠”或“你好自为之”之类的话，我想《红楼梦》的意蕴一定全无。正是这“好”后的空白让人们揣想深悟，才不致流于俗套。似乎中国文学传统对此道已深谙。像沈从文先生《边城》里傩送的回与不回，余秋雨先生《垂钓者》中瘦老人钓鱼否，都有同样的留点空白让人回味的意趣。无怪乎有人说黛玉的一句不尽之言已将《红楼梦》的精华囊括呢！文学中的留一点空白，发人深思。
"Baoyu, how are you..." Daiyu at the end of the end of the red incense to fight to make people guess. If you shout out "you are cruel" or "you do it for yourself", I think the meaning of "dream of the Red Chamber" must have nothing. It is the blank after "good" that makes people speculate and realize deeply, so as not to become a mere cliche. It seems that the Chinese literary tradition is well versed in it. Like the Nuo sent back or not in Shen Congwen's border town, and whether the thin old man fished in Yu Qiuyu's angler, there are the same blank and memorable interest. No wonder some people say that the endless words of Daiyu have included the essence of a dream of Red Mansions. It is thought-provoking to leave a little blank in literature.
建筑中的空白亦有令人遐思之妙。而得此妙意的莫过于艾菲尔铁塔了。人们只听说艾菲尔铁塔是标榜工业革命成就的物体，却不曾知当初在其骨架构成之时有一阵争议。争议焦点即是否要用建筑材料将塔身充实。所幸，最终建筑师还是让它镂空地置现在世人眼前。今日望它，铁塔在空白处亮出巴黎的建筑风光。建筑上的空白独辟蹊径，让美景一览无遗。
The gap in architecture is also fascinating. The Eiffel Tower is the best place to get this idea. People only heard that the Eiffel Tower was a symbol of the achievements of the industrial revolution, but they didn't know that there was a controversy when its skeleton was made. The focus of the dispute is whether to enrich the tower with building materials. Fortunately, in the end, the architect let it be hollowed out in front of the world. Today, looking at it, the tower reveals the architectural scenery of Paris in the blank. The blank space in the building creates a unique way for a panoramic view of the beautiful scenery.
生活中亦不乏空白之义。像插花艺术中的衬托，往往在一侧留出一点空白，给人以似有若无之感。像绘画中的浓淡相宜，也隐透了空白的旨趣。而音乐中的“此时无声胜有声”，将不尽之音蕴于空白的回味中，余音不绝如缕，绕梁三日。
There is no lack of blank meaning in life. Like the foil in the art of flower arrangement, it often leaves a little space on one side, giving people a sense of "if not". Like the painting of the appropriate shade, but also hidden through the blank purport. And the music of "at this time, silence is better than sound", will not end the sound in the blank aftertaste, the aftertaste is endless, twists and turns the beam for three days.
“留一点空白”，在生活中、艺术里随处可见可闻可感，我想我们的思维也该在物欲横流的快节奏中暂停。留一点空白，去回味人生中的快乐哀伤；留一点空白，去描绘未来的蓝图；留一点空白，让消磨在马蹄轮铁，无谓敷衍中的光阴回溯到原始情愫中来，让生命在空白处闪亮起来。树影参差中的月光如清泉抚过我的心灵，在空白处余光不散……
"Leave a little blank", which can be heard and felt everywhere in life and art. I think our thinking should also pause in the fast pace of material desire. Leave a little blank to recall the happiness and sadness in life; leave a little blank to describe the blueprint of the future; leave a little blank to let the time spent in horseshoe wheel iron, meaningless perfunctory go back to the original feelings, let life shine in the blank. The moonlight in the shadow of trees is like a clear spring that caresses my heart, leaving light in the blank
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文章由“月泻树丛中”这一极其普通的意象切入话题，可谓角度巧妙；并由此引发联想，生发感悟，可谓机智机灵。
This article starts from the very common image of "the moon in the trees", which can be said to be ingenious in terms of angle, and thus leads to association, feelings and wisdom.
文章开篇扣题。作者由“月泻树丛”想到归有光，想到其《项脊轩志》，想到有关空白的种种物象，想到人生留点空白的别致情调，并进一步联想到《红楼梦》的意蕴、沈从文先生的《边城》和余秋雨先生的《垂钓者》的意趣，感叹“文学中的留一点空白，发人深思”；再联想到艾菲尔铁塔“在空白处亮出巴黎的建筑风光”，感叹“建筑上的空白独辟蹊径，让美景一览无遗”；并进一步联想到生活中、艺术里留一点空白的现象也是随处可见可闻可感。最后，作者深深感叹，热情呼告，让我们“留一点空白，去回味人生中的快乐哀伤；留一点空白，去描绘未来的蓝图；留一点空白，让消磨在马蹄轮铁，无谓敷衍中的光阴回溯到原始情愫中来，让生命在空白处闪亮起来。”有力收束。
At the beginning of the article. The author thinks of GUI Youguang, Xiang Jixuan's annals, all kinds of images about the blank, the unique feeling of leaving a little blank in life, the meaning of a dream of Red Mansions, the border city by Shen Congwen and the angler by Yu Qiuyu, and laments that "there is a little blank in literature, which makes people think deeply"; then he thinks of the significance of "dream of Red Mansions" Eiffel Tower "highlights the architectural scenery of Paris in the blank", exclaims that "the blank in architecture is unique, which makes the beautiful scenery fully visible"; and further associates with the phenomenon of leaving a little blank in life and art, which can also be seen and felt everywhere. At last, the author deeply laments and enthusiastically proclaims that let's "leave a little blank to recall the joys and sorrows of life; leave a little blank to describe the blueprint of the future; leave a little blank to let the time spent in horseshoe and wheel iron, needlessly perfunctory, go back to the original feelings, and let life shine in the blank." A powerful ending.
文章从自然美到艺术美，由文学及建筑及生活及艺术，左右逢源，看似信手拈来，实是别具眼光。作者的思维不可谓不活跃，眼界不可谓不开阔，目光不可谓不犀利，感悟不可谓不独特啊！另外，文章开头与结尾相呼应，首尾圆合，也是获得高分的亮点。
From natural beauty to artistic beauty, from literature, architecture, life and art, this article seems to come at your fingertips, but it really has a unique vision. The author's thinking is not inactive, vision is not open, vision is not sharp, perception is not unique! In addition, the beginning and the end of the article correspond to each other, and the beginning and the end are round, which is also the highlight of getting high scores.